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by Rumpelyssa

person Mary
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! This chapter was really good! Especially the tension between Blaise and Lucius. And Narcissa trying to tell him to tell Hermione how he feels about her. Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
person ccrawley
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hopefully, Dudley and company get a free ride straight to jail. Lucius needs to start wooing.
person Pam
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks.
person BuckyKattGirl
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
No, I have not changed my mind about Blaise-and no use getting defensive about him EBQ 'cuz I never will. Get him together with some cute nurse in the hospital or something! I agree about the racist thing though! I love the whole Narcissa portrait matchmaker idea-I always like Narcissa when she's written sympathetically! Please update soon!
person Lady Lynn
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I cannot wait to see Dudley gets what's coming to him. Excellent chapter, keep it up!
person Anathema
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*raises hand* Erm...can we hang Piers and Dudley by their balls with a rusty pair of tweezers over a bear trap?








Just a thought. ^__^
person faye
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like it :) they are so cute and lucius is nice when vulnerable!
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes, I do love this chapter. It's good to see an author broach a subject that is contraversial. You are doing a great job and update everyday if you want to (HINT, HINT)!!
person lisa
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!!!! Poor Blaise. He gets Hermione to say yes and then trying to save her he gets hurt. and Wow Lucius Head of Aurors. Awesome. Their department should make sapeedy progress, after all Lucius knows the tricks of the trade being a Dark wizard. More more more more Please. I dont hate Ron really. He just comes off a git in alot of stories and in some he's really wonderful. I love all your stories Bella. this one's shaping up good. Hopefully the Lucius muse makes more of an appearance. Goodluck.
person witch
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Have been following your story from the beginning and I LOVE it!! Flawless writing and easy to read but at the same time enchanting in content....looking forward to Lucius and Hermione succombing to each other!!!
And poor Blaise!! Quiet nasty with the git Dudley...will Lucius get his revenge perhaps?

Update soon please!!!

Cheers,

witch