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person lisa
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh I love it Bella. Awesome chappie. A Lecherous Snape makes an appearance. This should be fun. Definitely a wild rollercoaster ride. I cant wait for more. More more more please. Harry finally gets one up on his cousin. and things should definitely heat up with Snape staying at the mansion and Lucius offering Hermione a place to stay. He's so sweet but yet darkly seductive in this one. I Love it. Please update soon.
person Lady Lynn
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yup, I am thoroughly grossed out by Snape in this one. So, Dudders, HELL YEAH! I hope he gets the kiss!
person mary
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! I figured the invisible man had to be Snape! Poor Lucius got to put up with him. Severus did tell him out right to tell Hermione how he felt about her. Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
person ccrawley
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dudley is getting off too easy--he needs a dementor's kiss. She is so lucky to have all these men and boys lusting after her.
person Lyssa
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY FOR LUCIUS AND SNAPE!!!....even though snapes being naughty...YAY LUCIUS!!!!MORE STORY>>>MORE STORY!!!
person ShilohDarke
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ROFLMAO! I can just imagine how embarassed Hermione was when Snape was messing with her... Oh wow! funny, but that just made my Muse give me yet another story idea!!! (Like I don't have enough already swimming through my brain!) I loved this chapter. Good for Hermione for putting her foot down about leaving the Burrow... Hmmm... moving in with Lucius? LOL! Ideas run amuck in my head!!!

More, soon, PLEASE???

SD
person Lyssa
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Blaise is a decent guy, I just dont like him with Hermione...more Lucius......more story...
person Criosdan
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I always liked Blaise. I don't know why but I do. Nevertheless Lucius and Hermione should get together.
Dudley and the others shall be cursed!!
person Anon
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it!
person Citten
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well regardless if blood is thicker than water they should still be punished for what they did or lack thereof. well can't wait to see how things progress with hermione and lucius! that was really sweet and gentleman like for lucius to hold and comfort hermione while in the hospital. i know hermione is indepentant and has a brillent mind and all but i really think she likes being taken care of and spoiled rotten! (doesn't every woman?) please have the next chapter updated soon!