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by Rumpelyssa

person Dee Dee
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter, especially Narcissa
person BuckyKattGirl
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't know but I'm sure it was well deserved. Very sneakily and sexily I suspect. After all, all's fair in love and war. Yes, Lucius is just being stupid, but it's rather endearing, none the less. I have no idea but I'm sure it will involve Great Balls of Fire. Give up on the slippers and get a new pair. After all, I have eight pair myself (one to match each set of PJs).
person Dee Dee
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow I love this story, and Snape is an unexpected addition. I guess if he is discovered by Lucius coworkers he will be in trouble.
Interesting, maybe Narcissa asked Snape to make a play for Hermione to force Lucius in to action. And now that Hermione is living with Lucius, I can
person marie_606
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i want more. what happens with Lucius and Hermione?
person bob
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Is he and Narcissa in this together, or does he want Hermione for himself?



That practically gives it away, silly chit! :D But it got all the more sweeter with Snape featuring in it!
person asdg
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like snape :) gehhe i like your story a lot! !!!
person BuckyKattGirl
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I cannot tell you how satisfying it was to see Dudley get some of his own back! And I love how you gave Harry some serious stones in this chapter! I'm sick of how hesitantly most people write him! Well done EBQ! Please update soon!
person Citten
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i am going to be totally opitmist and say severus was just helping lucius along. because he could have done much worse to hermione but he didn't. besides he waited and listened at the door and chuckled that gives me a great hope. (so try your best to not a have the story go in that direction, PLEASE!?) okay thanks for the quick update hope that there is another on soon, really soon! :)
person skye
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Bella.. another wonderful chapter. Snapes a little creepy though...( I am a major HG/SS shipper, so its weird having a creepy Snape...instead of a creepy Malfoy)I can't wait to see what happens do Duddy-kins.....
person angel
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man i hope sev is there to help get them together and did he chuckel because he is happy they agree on something or he knows something they dont or both .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel