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person angel
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man .. lucius dont hold out let mione try and heal you ....and what did she do to the pink toad.... please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
person Catstaff
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*grins*

Lucius is being stupid, Hermione transfigured Umbridge into a centaur, Harry's going to buy Ginny an engagement ring (Or did he already give her one? I can't remember...), and I have no idea who borrowed your fluffy pink slippers, it wasn't me. I have non-fluffy blue slippers, much safer to wear in a house with a pouncing attack kitty.

I have only one complaint to register, and that is the fact that you're not updating four or five times daily. Thank you for a most wonderful tale thus far.

~Catstaff
person LaBibliographe
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is tripping right along. I like all the new developments all being woven into the plot. Snape is incredibly annoying so far, going against Lucius and bothering Hermione. It seems too simple to think he just wants to feel Hermione up. The way Snape is acting is rather like Spock getting into the joy juice. Not like his normal self. What is it all for? Hmmm. And Dudley going to Azkaban - hallelujah. Now can you send his uncle there, too? Just kidding. (Not really - snerk.)

I do hope Narcissa is NOT going to turn mean. She's dead and should be beyond that now. I hope she really does want the best for Lucius. Not that I've ever liked her. She's always been a roadblock, being married to the hottest wizard when it should have been...oops! I get too far into the HP universe sometimes. Sigh. Having Lucius be actually redeemable is going to my head (and elsewhere).

Another chapter where the UST stays high and I need to tune in again for the next chapter to see what happens with HG/LM. You're doing wonderfully bringing them along so believably. The air between them is starting to sizzle! I can't wait to see what happens when Hermione moves in with Lucius. I'm tearing my hair out here. You don't want me to go bald, do you? Continue!
person LaBibliographe
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6 - I'm glad Narcissa is trying to help Lucius. I'm guessing what Hermione did to Umbridge - does she have a couple of extra legs, now?

Ooh, shivers! Lucius and Hermione are finding a strong attraction - he's mourning, but starting to emerge from his grief and now Hermione will be waiting for him. Delicious! Snape is still incredibly annoying - what a lecher. Hermione should kick him upside the huevos. Everything is heating up and - is it getting hot in here? Even Harry is getting some. Looks like Arthur might get lucky, too. Update soon.
person ShilohDarke
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
R-Rolling
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Sorry that I didn't explain that last review... I love this new chapter! I love how Snape is continuing to toy with Hermione, and how Lucius wants her so badly, but is too hesitant for his own good! I am just tickled pink that Harry recognizes that Hermione needs Lucius... I feel pity for poor Kingsley (he needs someone) Blaise's mom... Hmmm... You know, I think somewhere deep down, she knows that Hermione isn't responsible for what happened to him, but it is a mother's instinct to protect and the only way she may know to protect him is by keeping him away from the person that was with him when he got in trouble.

Good for Narcissa! I think that between her and Hermione, they'll have Lucius giving in soon enough! PLease let him give in soon enough... Or, then again, maybe he needs to not figure out that he needs Hermione until she is ready to move on and find someone else... Then he'll sweep her up into his arms, kiss the daylights out of her and swear his undying affection.... ( Okay, so I'm a sap!) LOL! Maybe it's Snape that needs to have her considering moving on? Lucius really doesn't like the idea of him being the one to touch her...

Love the story honey! Continue soon!

SD
person Pam
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks.
person dsf
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i REALLY want to know what happened to Umbridge!
person mary
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! This was good! Didn't expect Severus to be in her bedroom! Maybe he can push the two of them together? Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
person Lyssa
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Go NARCISSA!!!

YAY LUCIUS>>>

snape stop being a naught boy and go find someone else...but only because Lucius is better for Hermione this time around...

YAY LUCIUS!!!!!!!!!!!!
person lisa
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lucius is being a big git. It's all right thre in front of him. He is being quite admirable. If anyone doubted his love for his wife. they would have to eat their words. And lol Harry and Ginny are goonna sneak a few shags in before marriage lol thats what I think. and Indeed lovely lecherous Severus. He adds spice to it all. If you Lucius dont grab her, Severus may just steal her. although doing it all legal remains to be seen lol. Funny and sad. Sad she loses Blaise. However she gains Lucius and lol Severus. More more more please. Please update soon.