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by Rumpelyssa

person candymac
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Hermione needs to trap Lucius naked in the shower, and model all of the new undies for him. Hmmm, dear Prof Snape is trying to stake his claim. Could turn into great fun and games. Harry needs to get a back bone and a nice quiet bed with the lovely Miss Weasley.
person skye
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You can borrow my white bunny slippers, they have feet and a tail too!( my two real rabbits always get wierded out by them though..)

Umbridge! yee gads what did our lovely heroine do to her? ( this time! ) lol

Loved Cissy's talk with Hermione! priceless!

skye
person BuffyXO
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I know why Lucius knew how Hermione took her porriage -- he likes it the same way! I love the subtle way you are pushing them together, so it is a PWP. I enjoy that about your writing. I am currently finishing up the other chapter posted, so I will shower more praise then, but why haven't you explained about the owl? Keep up the fantastic work!
person marie_606
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh oh oh oh oh.... you need to hurry with that next chapter and yes Luc is being amazingly stupid, so Hermione has got her work cut out for her, but make it quick please!!
person Cecilia
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOLOL!!!....That was great seeing Umbridge get a kick in the ass. Teehee....they kissed. That was so sweet. I'll say it again, I love reading such a tame side of Lucius. You are doing a great job and update soon please!!

P.S. umm...if between updates Lucius gets bored, send him to my house.
person Citten
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
honey i don't care if this whole story is pink fuzzy-fluffy slipper, this is great! now i really think it will be interesting to see if hermione takes cissy's advise and slaps lucius right on the face and to have his true reactions to it because face it is only a human warm-blooded male (need i say more? ;)) well i wonder what misjustive harry and hermione will be getting into? please have the update soon!
person MistressMalfoy
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! :) umm that's it lol
person candymac
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think she turned Umbridge's behind into a centar's hindquarters, or she made it appear that everyone Umbridge saw was a centar. Ron needs a near death experience with a kitchen appliance. Ginny drags Harry back to Hogwarts and locks him in a broom closet, and places giant hickeys all over his body. I just love your chapters.
person Anathema
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*bashfully hands you back the pink fluffy slippers*

Excellent update! More soon please!
person universal randomness
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Is Umbridge going to sprout a tail?
Harry going to sneak over to HoggyWarty with his cloak?
Will Snape and Cissa's painting 'get it on'?
Will Hermione REALLY slap Lucius?
Oh, don't worrry, I will tune in next time!
Bobxx