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It's nice to have Hermione as the one going after Lucius instead of the other way around. That seems much more believable. She's an outgoing smart young witch who knows what she wants. If she's going after Lucius that means she's a VERY smart young witch. He's still hanging back which makes for nice conflict.

I don't know where Snape comes in, but he's really a gadfly, isn't he? It does seem as if Hermione isn't minding too much that he's manhandling her body. She's a little free with her physical self. So where is this going with Snape?

It's nice Harry is allowing Hermione to make up her own mind. Mature of him. And Umbridge as a pink toad is even better than my guess, which was that Hermione changed her into a centaur, the thing she's most afraid of. Ooh, when Lucius sees the new lingerie, we'll all be there, won't we? Please? Nice chapter. Now next chapter...soon? 8-)

Oh.... Poor Kingsley! But, tee hee!!! I can't wait to see what she does to Lucius! The prat deserves it! I like what she did to Umbridge... although, I was thinking that maybe she had done something a little less conspicuous... like give the woman a horses cock! But, turning her into a toad was good too!

More soon, please?

SD

man im glad lucius want to see what was taking so long .. poor mione has sev and kingsley wanting her to .. lucius you bettter hurry up before sev or kingsley take her ... please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel

if i were in her shoes i'd be angry at him too...giggles...what hasnt he thought of???

waaaahooo!!!! Yay Hermione. She's about to get her man lol one way or another. and Snape is indeed a bastard but ol I cant help but love the snarky bastard. lol. Harry seems to know what's up even if Hermione and Lucius don't/ and what a time foR kINGSLEY to speak up. but at least he has now even if he knows he wont get anywhere. So many Men soo little time. I'd love to be Hermione for a few lovely moments. Lol I feel for Lucius a determined Hermione can be relentless and he's in a bit of trouble now with her!!! True though she shoulkd accept and just be happy he wants to pay. I however get what she means. Maybe Lucius will remember to live again after Narcissa's lil pep. and the added ardour of Snape should really kickstart him. I guess We shall see. I cant wait to see what happens next. Lol well If you dont know whats up lol I suppose the Naughty Lucius Muse does. Hopefully all will be revealed lol. omg I sound soo cheesy. sorry. Love the story Bella. More more more Please. Please Update soon.

I think Snape

Ch 7 - Severus is very very sneaky but he's a bit of a kick to read here. Lucius needs a boot in the bum o get moving. Kingsley is a sweetheart. Awwwww. LOL

Bella dear, you made my day when I saw that your story was updated! Poor Kingsly and really everyone but Snape, I feel so bad that they all cannot just cut through the formalities and get on with it. However, I am LOVING all of the UST between Hermione and Lucius. Everytime they touch my stomach flips. I love that you have a PWP. One question -- did Hermione pass out in the kitchen with Snape or was it part of a ruse? I was a little confused there. Finally, I didn't really see too many errors in this work. I would rather have your tales quick and with character than slower and error-free. You are quickly becoming one of my favorite authors!

My apologies! Here I thought I'd been reviewing each chapter and now I realize that hadn't so I'll explain further. I am thoroughly enjoying the story, especially Snape. He is being so slippery as he pursues Hermione. It does make me wonder though if he doesn't want her just because he thinks Lucius does. There is real competition there. Kingsley...sigh...I just love him. He is so strong yet so sweet. I hope you have him meet someone deserving of him. Ron needs to get laid and not by Hermione. LOL Anyway, thanks for such an enjoyable story and I'm sorry I didn't review before.

If Hermione has no use for Severus maybe she could send him to me. ;)
Lucius will lern that he can love again! (At least I hope so)