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person Cecilia
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for giving me a "shot" of the drug update. Wonderful chapter and I can't wait to see what Hermione has in store for Lucius next!!!
person mary
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Poor Lucius jealous over Severus. Hermione is really tempting him! Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
person firewall
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Darn but that Snape is hot! Mind you, Lucius is as well. lol Whew!
person LaBibliographe
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Re Chapter 8:
Geez, how did I miss a chapter? Someone else must have posted quickly after your Ch.8 and I can't always remember chapter numbers to tell how far I am in a story. Sorry, but now I get two chapters together so it's not all bad.

In Ch.8 I love how Hermione wraps Scrimgeour round her finger and he sees a brilliant politician in her future. He's probably right seeing as how she's already mowed down Lucius, who's no simpletom himself. I think Hermione was already pretty sneaky w/o Lucius' help. Witness the timeturner episode in Book Three.

(Check the difference between lathe and lave - I don't think Ginny would like Harry lathing her...)

Harry with Ginny - sigh... Beautifully done.

That Hermione's a firecracker. I don't know how Lucius withstood her red silk, but she's getting close to breaking him. Yup, he's a goner. And she still has more than a week to go as his secretary. I can't answer any of the questions at the end of this chapter, so I'm moving on to Chapter 9.
person universal randomness
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"Universal Randomness: Hee hee, that's funny! Umbridge sprouting a tail!! I hadn't thought of that! Well done. Thanks. Here's the update where you do get to find out what happened to that toad!"

Wouldn't a half mutant pig-toad just be so much more attractive than Umbridge? ;)
person Mell
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like your fic :) but hurry up a bit., it's getting a bit slow., by the way., severus <3
person Citten
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
never liked chang so i will agree with you on that! ginny well it will be interseting to see what kind of trouble she gets into for not being at the school. well harry and ginny are happy, but did her parents hear them and just not do anything or what (i am sure you will let us know though). ron is still an ass. and the only getting i wish for severus to get is someone else or to get some of his punishment, sorry i love hg/ss stories too-with a passion but this is a lucius and hermione story and i wish it to stay that way, but again it is your story. well lucius is starting to crumble-break, whatever and it will be so much fun! :) can't wait for your next update!!!!!!
person marie_606
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
snape can go hang himself!! please type faster, i want to know wats going to happen!!!
person lisa
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh I definitely liked this chappie. lemons yay. and I am wondering too about a few of your questions. hopefully naughty Lucius muse will grant us a bon and answer them for us with upcomiing chappies. lol. Ahh well the Hermione muse had to be dominated who better than naughty Lucius muse? lol. Lucius though must be going for sainthood. He's sooo strong willed. lol Hermione's been forewarned. I dont see her leaving it anytime soon though. So woot woot. More lemons ahead somewhere lol. Harry and Ginny were swwet and thanks so much Bella. I do hope poor Severus gets some. he needs some loving as well. too bad this isnt a threesome lol. I love Lucius ,Hermione and Severus together. More more more please. Please ohhh please update soon. sorry my reviews a day late ummm sims online kinda took my time last night. I know i am bad . sorry I bow to the review gods and beg forgiveness . lol I am soo silly today. anyways Kudos for another wonderful chappie.
person candymac
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW! The only thing that Hermione needs to do is tease Lucius by giving head to an ice cream cone. Ginny missed the great Hogwarts flood caused by Peeves and Moaning Myrtle playing submarine races in the bathroom above the Gryffindor girl's dorm. Maybe Severus needs to wake Hermione from an incredibly erotic dream by nibbling on her bit's and bobbles. LOL