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oh boy.... he finally gave in hu.. or does he have a nasty plan... well, i'll find out soon enough wont i? hurry up with the next chap. ey

Chapter Nine: Ahh, caught up, now. Scary, that Hogwarts was invaded just like in the book (I'll assume we are somewhere in Book Six' time) but I'm glad Lucius and Hermione are going to hold down the fort (more time for hanky-panky) and I think the hanky part is making up Hermione's dress, yes? Lucius is stronger than I gave him credit for, except he needs to get up from his knees, in all senses. I'd like him to turn the tables on brassy Hermione - they are so well matched it's just yummy.

What can one expect from a git like Ron? So childlike and selfish still. Maybe he'll grow up sometime and they can all three be at least friends again.

Hermione keeps getting sidetracked by Snape. Find someone else for him. Maybe Umbridge. She's probably so disagreeable 'cause she isn't getting any. 8-)

Oh my gosh!!! That is a pretty trippy chappy, cookie! Of course, I know you have to sleep sometime! I was just wishful thinking... (sigh) I have been having a bit of a hard time trying to write lately, myself. NOT that I don't have the ideas... but I've been having some trouble with my back, and haven't been able to sit in my chair as long as it takes to write. But I still enjoy sitting down to read a chapter or two... (Hoping for an update soon!)

SD

Loved this chapter! I think Hermione is going after Lucius with the same enthusiasm she has for her studies. It is a normal reaction to Lucius being overly passive and cautious. So I think the Vamp act is in character.

I am surprised that Arthur is not that upset about Ginny and Harry. Wander if Molly was as cool about it?

Snape's is so convenient that Lucius better be good to Hermione, or else the runner up might be called to take the place of the winner.

I am surprised that people are not being as nasty about the fact that Lucius is keeping Hermione like he would a mistress.

It

I love this story, I can't wait for the next chapter. Hermoine should do somthig a little more slytherin in the next one.

I apologize for the confusion from my previous review. The drama of Snape and Ron's with Hermione just makes one want to have her happy with Lucius, but also have Snape and Ron happy themselves. I like the story and look forward to the next chapter.

Gee, I'm really enjoying this fanfic! I hope that you are able to update soon. There's not much to say, except for the fact that I'm hooked. keep up the writing, -JCM

wow that was great .. man ron is a stupid git but in happy harry and mione are still talking ..hmm i wonder is lucius still going to have a word with cissa.. please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more later for now

angel

"alkaseltzer"?
What?
Interesting chapter.
Can we have a featured scene of Hoggy Woggy Hogwarts?

I just think that Harry/Ginny ship is a safe choice, but you more than make up with it using Hermione and Lucius as your inspiration for this fic. I didn't see the attack on the school coming and it is a wonderful plot point to build the stakes, but also show that Arthur knew of the Ginny/Harry trist. Ron is a dufus, but his actions are not that unrealistic. I have had friendships end over much less than that. Hermione's mourning of the friendship really made my heart go out to her and lessened my opinion of Snape being Sleasy. He comforted her and also gave Hermione a valid reason to goad Lucius into finally kissing her and admitting his feelings. Now, what kind of games would he have in mind? Please update soon, you know I LOVE your writing and story.