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by Rumpelyssa

person Mary
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! This was good! I loved the part where Salazar took control of Voldermort and changed heirs to Lucius. Kind of felt sorry for Voldermort though. But poor Severus doesn't know what went on! Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
person marie_606
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
keep up the good work, i like where this is heading
person Ripewickedplum12
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a trully wonderful story!! Plz update ASAP!!!
person Citten
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sorry missed reviewing chapter nine, it was great! i really love that cissa has her useing her stuff and giving her advise and they like each other. i also liked the eneractions with everybody.
now this chapter was a little hard for me i really disliked the way the severus took advantage of hermione (i know he is slytherin but that does not mean i have to like it!). wow she passed out well now what will she do? (laughing-what was that with severus and the teddy bear?!) well that was really cool with the founders i can't wait to see what you do with that. please update soon!
person Heather
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love the story! is it at all posible for it to become a severus\hermione\lucius? cause i think she should just pick both! thats what i would do
person jcm
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
and you continue to reel me in... i'm a fish here - tee-hee. once again, can't wait for an update on this... and My Fair Witch. All very good! *salutes* -JCM
person Lyssa
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOOT!!!
YAY FOR SALAZAR COMMING!!!
YAY LUCIUS!!!
BOO SEVERUS
YAY MS. ZABINI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Criosdan
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It doesn't sound like Salazar ist happy with his heir. I think he should kick Voldemorts ass!
person ShilohDarke
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Interesting chapter there! I wonder what Lucius and Severus were talking about when the one HE wants isn't there??? Curious indeed... okay... More. Now. Please??? Oh, and I will update Dare to Dance as soon as I can..
person Pamela
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks.