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December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, I was sick and had to play catch up! This story is the Bomb! Lucius needs to do some serious love making, and get Hermione in the right frame of mind. Severus needs to hang out with Hannah Abbott, and find out if blondes have more fun. Voldemort needs to chain Ron to a wall, and see if maybe they could be compatible for a live lived in hell. They make a stunning couple right??!!
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December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! What a great new chapter to your story. You were right that I would understand how the founders fit into the story and I love that you laid the groundwork for them early on in your story. I also enjoy how you sprinkle in little bits of humor throughout the story, since I was laughing at the founder and their interactions and of course Lucius's bathrobe ... hmmm ... his bathrobe *sigh. I would imagine that Voldermort will now become more adamant to wiping the muggleborns out, since it would be the best way to hurt Lucius for stealing his role as heir to Slytherin. I hope that Snape doesn't ruin Hermione and Lucius's fun, because I love the two of them together -- you have such a nack for their pairing. Keep up the awesome job as always and thanks for updating, you made my day :).
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December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved the twist of the hairs of the founders! You come up with the most original plot twists.
I think poor Hermione and Lucius will have more problems now than before. Voldemort will want to kill Lucius to try to get his Slithering mojo back. And he would have to do it before Lucius has any children.
I guess Severus could help them, but seeing that he has someone (Hermione) to gain by letting him die, it does not look good for Lucius.
I think poor Hermione and Lucius will have more problems now than before. Voldemort will want to kill Lucius to try to get his Slithering mojo back. And he would have to do it before Lucius has any children.
I guess Severus could help them, but seeing that he has someone (Hermione) to gain by letting him die, it does not look good for Lucius.
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December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, EBQ I gotta say I like this chapter MUCH better than the previous one. Although I really would like the question resolved about whether or not Lucius or Hermione will ever get some! Soon would be nice!
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December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, who would have figured on Hermione being an heir except for the fact that this is a Hermione story which I didnt take into account. Ha! now Snape has no chance of getting Hermione. looking forward to the next chapter.
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December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good chappie. I was quite surprised about the founders. And they were all funny and cool. Poor Voldie, he just cant win. Wonder thouhg if this will make him seek to destroy them further.He will have it in double for Lucius , making him right up there with Harry. Cant wait t o see what happens next. and Thanks soooo much for the Severus action in last chap[ter and lol he's about to cause trouble but I believe he's a little too late. and Lucius is at the end of his patience with Severus, so should make for quite an entertaining confrontation, if Severus does indeed ask Hermione to marry him. Cant wait to see. hehehe am loving it. More more more please. I wonder though just how they are going to fix it all, Hogwarts is a mess. Cant wait to see what happens next. Please Update soon.
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December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
holy shit,,,just keeps getting better. and grumpy voldie stuck his beard in the post-box ha ha... but mione and luc really need to get down and dirrrty somtime soon.. dont get a writers block on me now...
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December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I admit I have been *hem hemm* lazy in my review of the past coule of days but LOL.....Saturday was heeelariotus!
having the Four Founders treating the Heirs are little kids and Voldie!!!!! heeheeheeeee.....acting like a spoilt little brat oh Gods, I could just see the "movie voldi" all small and shameful when saying he didn't know he'd be impotent! Bella, I hope you have a large crisper drawer to hold all the carrots and parsnips I'm owling to your plot bunnies!
having the Four Founders treating the Heirs are little kids and Voldie!!!!! heeheeheeeee.....acting like a spoilt little brat oh Gods, I could just see the "movie voldi" all small and shameful when saying he didn't know he'd be impotent! Bella, I hope you have a large crisper drawer to hold all the carrots and parsnips I'm owling to your plot bunnies!
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December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 11 - Well, that was a very full chapter. If Voldemort has been incapacitated by Salazar (he was, wasn't he?) where does the story go now? What was the travelling spell? I'm glad that Hermione and Lucius stopped talking in ye olde style of English after the four founders left. I was afraid their speech would be affected by the meeting. I'm a bit confused about which rumour Harry wanted spread - huh?
And bring on the lemony Lucius and Hermione. We almost got there this chapter. I'm hoping next chapter will do it. Don't let Snape gum up the works. Give him Hannah.
And bring on the lemony Lucius and Hermione. We almost got there this chapter. I'm hoping next chapter will do it. Don't let Snape gum up the works. Give him Hannah.