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I love Salazar! Funny, witty and sly to boot!

Are you going to finish this Story? It's really getting good. I really like your writing style. Keep up the great work!

Please ,tell me somewhere this story Is finished?I need more it was great

Omg, this story is by far the best I have read in a very long time. It's fantastically written, the plot is so intricate and perfect and I thank you for writing what you have so far. Please update soon as I am dying to know what happens next :)

I love this and I hope that you update soon and I cannot wait to see when they find the real Severus that is gonna be awesome and what of Voldemort?

I'm very much enjoying this story. I do hope that it is not permanently abandoned. Please write more... thanks!

I love this story so far update soon please!

ohhhh my gawd. this story is awesome!i love the fact Hermione's attracting men left and right. haha! she's actually one of the two (teenage)females i like in HP. The other being Luna. I'm guessing the false Snape is Rufus? anyway! if you've got a mailing list, can you add me to it? please! or do you have a fanfiction.net account? i'm gonna read your other stories now and they look so promising!kya!

Hi, a quick comment on the linguistics of this chapter, though the story line is fresh, interresting, and well-paced. The gang are unlikely to have used the term 'caucasion' as well as 'nigger'. It would be more common for the first to not be commented on, to be 'white', or a general compliment. The 'caucasion' also seems a bit above the vocab of gangs (though this is because yours is) The scene also seems slightly staged; as if it has not been experienced. You could possibly make them seem fairly drunk. In the next chapter, (I've only read to there), it would also be unlikely for race to be mentioned in the arrest, particularly using the term 'black' as opposed to 'afro-carribean'. I'm impressed with the new take on that though; Blaize is mostly written as Italian or eastern-european.
All together, innovative idea, well-written execution!!!
(love the way you write Lucius; and my bet is on Snape ganging up with Narcissa!)

I know that it has been a while since you have updated this story, but I hope that you will PLEASE continue with it. I would love to find out who the faux Snape is and if they find the real Snape. I would also like to see Lucius and Hermione get married finally and start their family. So PLEASE PLEASE continue.