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November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Prospera
I like the first three chapters... please, write more.
Ron is such a dolt isn't he... and the woman that sold him the potion... me is thinking Bellatrix Lestrange.
I like the first three chapters... please, write more.
Ron is such a dolt isn't he... and the woman that sold him the potion... me is thinking Bellatrix Lestrange.
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November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omg Ron is a git and Lol I love it. Severus got him back. More more more please. I love it. Yummy Severus, revenge, and some plot to harm Hermione possibly, and lots of lemons!!!! Yay I love it. I cant wait to see Ron's reaction. will he faint or will he punch Severus , well I doubt he'd get close enough lol Severus is fast but I am betting he either punches Sev oe he goes after Hermione which in itself is not a good idea with Severus there.
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November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a rolling ball of fun! I can't wait to see where you take it!
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November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story... I love it, although I am wondering at why you didn't make the scenes more in depth? I wouldn't rate the story as R or NC-17 at this point. Maybe PG-13, but it definately isn't verygraphic yet...
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November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved it!!!