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for Melancholy Affection

by Ducky

person allie
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update
person lisa
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohhhh it's getting good. Love it. more more more more please. Ron's a git towards Severus as usual. and Poor Hermione. No teliing what Lucius has done to her besides cruciatus curse. Hope they get to her in time. Cant wait to see what happens next. Please update soon.
person beeky63
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ARGGGGGGG! A cliff hanger! You must update soon, the suspense is killing me. LOL. Keep up the good work. Toodles.
person Anon
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ch 10 & 11 I'm glad that I could assist in my small way and help to provide a title for you! Well, you've got a twist in your story now. I'm just hoping that Severus doesn't forget backup is essential when going in after idiots.
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update
person beeky63
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
To shag till the sun comes up, what a lovely concept. Alas, after 18 years of marriage and two kids, the mind is willing but the body just can't cope anymore. Anyway, drama and suspense added to the mix, the plot is getting interesting indeed. Can't wait for more. Hope you are feeling better. Toodles.
person lisa
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omg 2 chappies got away on me. wow so much going on. and Argggg Hermione was kidnapped. bastards . Severus was so sweet and he was going to ask her to marry him. I hope he finds her in time. and with Lucius and Draco down there with her, no telling what they will do to her. Poor Hermione and severus, so close to complete happiness just to have it dragged off from under them. I cant wait to see what happens next. More more more please. Please update soon. Loving it.
person lisa
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Like I said smut. lemons it's all good. Wow quite hot I must say. I love the deep connection between them , you can almost feel it. Loved it. you're doing so great. a nd Severus is getting his happiness and finally a life. Hermione seems so good for him, pulling him from his depressive. alone state, pulling him into the light. Love it. more more more more.Please update again soon.
person firewall
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ch 9 - This sounds too good to be true...what glitch are ou going to throw into the mix. Hmmm?
person beeky63
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
BONUS! Two chapters, YIPEEEEEE! Damn that was hot! If my hubby thinks he is going to go straight to sleep when we go to bed tonight, he is in for shock, I have other plans. Wink! Wink! Can't wait for more, but take the time you need to get better. Toodles.