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for Melancholy Affection

by Ducky

person firewall
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 13? - What a brilliant way of incapacitating Lucius. Of course he would be frightened by the Dementor! Severus is such a sweetie in this story. I got a kick from his comment to Draco...you picked the wrong side. Hahahaha
person beeky63
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! A happy ending! That was very clever of Severus, using an illusion of a dementer to distract Lucius. Is this the end? or is there more? Toodles.
person lisa
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. and yay Severus to the rescue. I am surprised he restrained himself from killing Lucius. and the illusion was pretty awesome. and it was sooo sweet he stayed by her side. and ahhhh if only we all had a Severus. that was so sweet and romantic. Loved it. more more more. or is that the end? Please update soon.
person Lydia
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is just great. i hope you post again soon. can't wait to find out what will happen next.
person Citten
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ot-oh, well now what! poor dear hermione, severus will be feruious now lets just hope that it does not go to his head until after the fight with lucius.
person Beeky63
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ARGGGGGGGGGGGG! Another cliffie! You're killing me here, lol. Things are getting really interesting, can't wait to see what happens next. Toodles.
person lisa
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oHHH nOOOO!!!!! Poor Hermione is getting beat. and finally Draco is caught and Severus didnt kill him. yet anyways. good chappie. so much action. lol I love it he let Bellatrix roll down the steps, oops. lol More more more Please. I cant wait to see what Severus catches Lucius doing to Hermione if he gets through his wards. which I believe he will. Love it. more please. Please update soon.
person Koneko-chan
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So many cliff hangers! When will they end?! Update soon!
person firewall
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just one word....WOW!
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey, I just finished reading this story and loved it. you really know how to spin a yarn. Your description of Severus emotions and thoughts really got me. now I have to wonder what this kidnap sidestory will mean in the long run. please continue, i can't wait to read more.