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for Moonlight Bites

by shelly56787

person selene
schedule December 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i think that you have some seriously amazing stories. i really enjoy reading them. and i also wish you the best of luck with all your future stories.
schedule October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL this is hilariuos blech well its 2 am were i am right now so i cant really foult you Grin hmm im making no sence anyway this was cool
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol. "all his naked glory"
nothing wrong with sleep-slashing.
schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
'Ello. Nice story! I like it lots. xD 'Specially Sirius' reaction. 'ON THE FOREHEAD!' xD
I think you could potentially continue it. Sure there wouldn't be *much* plot, but you could write about how Harry deals with him being a werewolf's mate, or if he becomes a werewolf himself... Or you could make Remus jealous of Ginny or something! xD That's a funny image in my head: Remus getting mad at Ginny for liking his mate. >.<
person PissedOffFairy
schedule May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay, you fixed it. Still love the story! add more chappies! please!
person Juli Black Malfoy
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well I hope that you go back and add more chapters to this because I liked it.
person PissedOffFairy
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved the story until you got the name wrong! R.J.Lupin is Remus John Lupin! Not Remus Andrew Lupin! Besides that i liked the story.
person momoko
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good story
person DayRaven94
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Better than some stories I've read from people completely awake
person Anon
schedule November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It didn