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I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I like both the idea of entering Lucius Malfoy's body and how you got Hermione in there. The Marauder's Map was clever. Your writing is always so smoothly sensuous. Will Hermione also enter Lucius' thoughts too, so she can hear what he's thinking? Will she ever be able to control him in any way? I'll have to wait, I guess, to find out.

And are you going to add to the Lucius/OFC story "Flame"? I'd like to read more of that one too.

Read the author's notes guys! Yes I got the idea of the portal from Being John Malkovich, but this will have a different turn to it. Love, Esme

interesting

It seems as a exciting story cant wait to read the next chappie... just a question of sorts, the portal and the door and going into the body of another is like a movie I saw years ago with Cameron Diaz as the actress, I think... did you base it off that movie or it is just simply coincedence?

oh Yah!!! I am so happy to see that you are going to do another LM/HG fic! I so enjoy your stories! This sounds reall interesting. I can't wait to see where you're going to take it!

SD