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for Dirty Laughter

by Naive

person angel
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was awsome i love it .. please say there is going to be more ... later for now

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person ...
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very good, i enjoyed that immensley..very hot!!!
person iluv2dance
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great work! You should really write more! Loved it and can see it progressing!
person Annie
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh i liked this.
person lizzy
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol that was pleasurably comical. nice twist. good ending. heh gawking at first then a light smile at the end. congrats on the excellent work.
person TiffANY
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you soooooooooooooooooo much!

This story is BRILLIANT!

Well done it is truly FANTASTIC!

Please continue

I love how Madam Pince caught them

And as you know I love you