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November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well the first chapter off put me just a bit because it was a bit dar(understandable) and didnt have much to do with hogworts yet but i loved the second chapter! i like your writing style. i also didnt see any errors(not that im very good at picking those out) so good work so ar and update soon!
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November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sorry kyboard fucked up.
well the first chapter off put me just a bit because it was a bit dark*(understandable) and didnt have much to do with hogworts yet but i loved the second chapter! i like your writing style. i also didnt see any errors(not that im very good at picking those out) so good work* and update soon!
well the first chapter off put me just a bit because it was a bit dark*(understandable) and didnt have much to do with hogworts yet but i loved the second chapter! i like your writing style. i also didnt see any errors(not that im very good at picking those out) so good work* and update soon!