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July 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OMG that chapter ending was so beautiful! And Draco standing up for himself to Blaise, wow!
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July 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Alright so I really should have taken the time between the last seven chapters and reviewed because I just know I'll forget everything I wanted to say but the moment I finally had some free time I just devoured them all - couldn't stop myself. So lets see if I can organize my thoughts.
- I love how so often the best stories come from a simple image in the writers imagination that they want to see played out, but in order to do that you have to create a whole story and world behind it, one of my favorite things about writing. Love that this story came from wanting that shower scene without the cumbersome cloak ;)
- Jaz is brilliant. Seriously love him, not to mention his interactions with Snape are just awesome and hilarious. He is the perfect bouncing board for Draco while trying to get his mind around everything and I'm so curious to see how he manages not only to pull Harry out but how he will react to his beast form with brings me to...
- Harry's beast form in general. Yikes. I'm so intrigued by not only his but Draco's as well. Both so well known for their insane violence and yet their both debating living with it just so they can be wild with each other. Is it to much to hope that Harry won't be mental when he comes back? That he can be around people and still be him? Please? And the same for Draco, perhaps bonding with Harry could ground him in a way, make him stable...I don't know, this is obviously your forte and not mine :) I sitting on pins and needles waiting to find out though!
- Dumbledore you ass. Yes, yes lets just leave Harry to break apart and die because he MAY pose a threat...alright you can come back but ONLY if I can kill you if I deem fit. Ugh I mean, I get it, I do, after seeing the rise and fall of Riddle but still - have some faith in Harry you old man! And way to go for Snape and Draco for fighting for Harry's return even when Harry wasn't willing to.
- All the crazy tension, all the yes and no and please and don't!, good god do you know how to write insanely good smut. Seriously the hall way...dang. Not to mention all the conflicting emotion behind it that just makes it all that much better. That kiss when Draco was trying to control the mating call - oh god that was amazing.
- Loving Ron and Hermione and Blaise and Pansy. Their all trying to care for them in their own way even if Harry and Draco are like 'yea just get the fuck out so we can fuck'. I would be worried if I was Blaise to in all honesty. Watching the crazy up and downs Draco's been going through and then finding out what Harry is - he's a good friend for worrying and trying to help.
- that last chapter left me feeling so warm and fuzzy and hot and bothered. Harry writing on Draco was just perfect on so many levels. And yay their finally together!!!! That was so wonderful even if Draco knows in the back of his mind that it's most likely all going to fall to shit and leave him broken. I'm proud of him for standing up for himself and for Harry. I like wild Draco, I think that boy had to have some seriously restrained passion simmering in his veins and I love seeing it get let out.
Can't wait for more! Here's to hoping for Harry coming back whole and intact - NOT crazy human eater or dead - Draco declining his marriage, and him finally being able to SEE Harry and they way he looks at him (though you get some crazy props for writing such good smut between Draco and invisible Harry).
- I love how so often the best stories come from a simple image in the writers imagination that they want to see played out, but in order to do that you have to create a whole story and world behind it, one of my favorite things about writing. Love that this story came from wanting that shower scene without the cumbersome cloak ;)
- Jaz is brilliant. Seriously love him, not to mention his interactions with Snape are just awesome and hilarious. He is the perfect bouncing board for Draco while trying to get his mind around everything and I'm so curious to see how he manages not only to pull Harry out but how he will react to his beast form with brings me to...
- Harry's beast form in general. Yikes. I'm so intrigued by not only his but Draco's as well. Both so well known for their insane violence and yet their both debating living with it just so they can be wild with each other. Is it to much to hope that Harry won't be mental when he comes back? That he can be around people and still be him? Please? And the same for Draco, perhaps bonding with Harry could ground him in a way, make him stable...I don't know, this is obviously your forte and not mine :) I sitting on pins and needles waiting to find out though!
- Dumbledore you ass. Yes, yes lets just leave Harry to break apart and die because he MAY pose a threat...alright you can come back but ONLY if I can kill you if I deem fit. Ugh I mean, I get it, I do, after seeing the rise and fall of Riddle but still - have some faith in Harry you old man! And way to go for Snape and Draco for fighting for Harry's return even when Harry wasn't willing to.
- All the crazy tension, all the yes and no and please and don't!, good god do you know how to write insanely good smut. Seriously the hall way...dang. Not to mention all the conflicting emotion behind it that just makes it all that much better. That kiss when Draco was trying to control the mating call - oh god that was amazing.
- Loving Ron and Hermione and Blaise and Pansy. Their all trying to care for them in their own way even if Harry and Draco are like 'yea just get the fuck out so we can fuck'. I would be worried if I was Blaise to in all honesty. Watching the crazy up and downs Draco's been going through and then finding out what Harry is - he's a good friend for worrying and trying to help.
- that last chapter left me feeling so warm and fuzzy and hot and bothered. Harry writing on Draco was just perfect on so many levels. And yay their finally together!!!! That was so wonderful even if Draco knows in the back of his mind that it's most likely all going to fall to shit and leave him broken. I'm proud of him for standing up for himself and for Harry. I like wild Draco, I think that boy had to have some seriously restrained passion simmering in his veins and I love seeing it get let out.
Can't wait for more! Here's to hoping for Harry coming back whole and intact - NOT crazy human eater or dead - Draco declining his marriage, and him finally being able to SEE Harry and they way he looks at him (though you get some crazy props for writing such good smut between Draco and invisible Harry).
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July 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 9 (again)
Since you gave permission: *g*
"'But she is my mother. That deranged, manipulative, self-serving woman that would rather I follow into jail than be happy and do things I feel are right, is my flesh and blood.. . .'"
Follow whom into jail? Lucius, I assume?
Since you gave permission: *g*
"'But she is my mother. That deranged, manipulative, self-serving woman that would rather I follow into jail than be happy and do things I feel are right, is my flesh and blood.. . .'"
Follow whom into jail? Lucius, I assume?
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July 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 10
I'm really feeling sorry for Draco and resigned annoyance at Harry, who is being his typical, sometimes stupidly stubborn, noble self. If he really wants to save Draco from being hurt by him, then he needs to just bite the bullet and leave, committing himself to an equally noble and stupid suicide. Which is exactly what I'm afraid I will find in the next chapter. :-(
"This feeling now, without Harry, was certainly more dead then before Draco had woken that morning many months ago. . . ."
Should be "more dead THAN before."
I'm really feeling sorry for Draco and resigned annoyance at Harry, who is being his typical, sometimes stupidly stubborn, noble self. If he really wants to save Draco from being hurt by him, then he needs to just bite the bullet and leave, committing himself to an equally noble and stupid suicide. Which is exactly what I'm afraid I will find in the next chapter. :-(
"This feeling now, without Harry, was certainly more dead then before Draco had woken that morning many months ago. . . ."
Should be "more dead THAN before."
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July 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 3-5
Wonderful, truly wonderful - I love where your going with this. You can't help but feel for Draco and the crazy whirlwind of emotions he's going through and it's just so Harry that he can't help but stay away from him even with seeing how it's tormenting him. And now Draco has to play mediator as they try to figure out whats going on and good lord the poor boys nerves aren't going to be able to take it especially if Harry keeps attacking him (which is so creative and sexy and I can't wait until he manages to get through Draco's denial ). Its so interesting that Draco has been able to sense creatures from other dimensions his whole life - that added tidbit adds so much depth to all the crazy shit that's going on.
Love that Harry's friends are looking after Draco.
Can't wait to hunker down and read more!
Wonderful, truly wonderful - I love where your going with this. You can't help but feel for Draco and the crazy whirlwind of emotions he's going through and it's just so Harry that he can't help but stay away from him even with seeing how it's tormenting him. And now Draco has to play mediator as they try to figure out whats going on and good lord the poor boys nerves aren't going to be able to take it especially if Harry keeps attacking him (which is so creative and sexy and I can't wait until he manages to get through Draco's denial ). Its so interesting that Draco has been able to sense creatures from other dimensions his whole life - that added tidbit adds so much depth to all the crazy shit that's going on.
Love that Harry's friends are looking after Draco.
Can't wait to hunker down and read more!
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July 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 11
Wow, great chapter! How ironic that it's Draco and Snape who are fighting for Harry's life. Methinks Dumbledore and Harry are way too accustomed to the idea of self-sacrifice being the way to solve everything!
"'You ass, its to keep you from hurting more!'
Wow, great chapter! How ironic that it's Draco and Snape who are fighting for Harry's life. Methinks Dumbledore and Harry are way too accustomed to the idea of self-sacrifice being the way to solve everything!
"'You ass, its to keep you from hurting more!'
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July 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
ok after this last chapter , the only ones I like are Snape and Draco...they want harry back cause Dubblefuck and that other one are scared of Harry now...Do they really think that Harry will become another dark lord ??????? what dumb fucks they are so Harry can kill Vol. but now that he needs help they really don't want to help//// well that does sums up what humans are wright so selfish ... Thanks for the update and hope to see more soon :):):):):):) you have me so hooked !!!!!!!!!
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July 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
So I've only had time to read the first chapter (grrr) but I'm loving it all ready. What an intriguing premises! Loved that taking Voldemort down was such an isolated event - very reminiscent of the evil dudes first down fall, killing Harry's adoptive parents and then finding himself wiped from existence when he tried to kill Harry. One thing I've always loved about Harry is how he can feel sorrow and find forgiveness for the people in his life who have treated him like crap. Him feeling guilty over the Dursley's death was a great little reminder of that side of him :)
Harry's "death" has seemed to driven Draco a bit batty and I was so intrigued by the new dynamics of everyone at Hogwarts. I can't wait to see what's going on and how Draco's going to react to Harry being stuck in a different dimension with him being the only one who can see(I'm assuming he'll be able to anyway) and feel him. Can't wait to read more!
Harry's "death" has seemed to driven Draco a bit batty and I was so intrigued by the new dynamics of everyone at Hogwarts. I can't wait to see what's going on and how Draco's going to react to Harry being stuck in a different dimension with him being the only one who can see(I'm assuming he'll be able to anyway) and feel him. Can't wait to read more!
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July 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Okay so apparently I couldn't resist...the kitchen shall remain a mess but fuck was the second chapter amazing! I just, don't even know what to say - how in the world did you manage to write something so sad and sweet and longing and sexy as hell and not to mention damn creative?!
"Harry's appearance on this plane was more an absence of. He was still, dark, and the color around him faded as if he were stealing it away. This was also where he could see the cracks forming, gold light dazzling out of his skin as his form slowly broke apart. Harry quickly switched back to the first plane, not wanting to see himself anymore
"Harry's appearance on this plane was more an absence of. He was still, dark, and the color around him faded as if he were stealing it away. This was also where he could see the cracks forming, gold light dazzling out of his skin as his form slowly broke apart. Harry quickly switched back to the first plane, not wanting to see himself anymore
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July 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Please keep writing, please keep writing! I devoured this story, please keep going!