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for Love of a Monster

by JunoSnape

schedule December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*raises hand* I would love to beta for you! Your story is very original, and I would love to see more. I have done beta work for several other authors and I have never heard any complaints. :) Let me know if you are interested! My email is my username as a gmail account.
person SnarkyB
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your story needs a beta reader--desperately. For example, the words 'your' and 'you're' are not interchangeable. This is a *very* basic mistake you should have caught, had you taken the time to read over what you wrote.
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for chapter 6! More answers later? Can't wait! Will the hat finally put him in Slytherin or put him back in Gryffindor?
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cool! I was hoping this story would be updated soon. Still loving it, tough you're being mean with the cliffhangers. XD

*waves hand in the air* I'll beta! I've done it before, still doing it for a few friends too. Another story will definately NOT be a burden. Just ping me and let me know what you need when. ^^
person thrnbrooke
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wait! I thought Severus was polyjuiced as Harry! So did Draco just grope Severus? Need chapter 5!
person Tac
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...Did Malfoy just... grope Snape? I didn't get that last bit. Isn't Harry a gargoyle so Snape is being the human him until he 'leaves'? If that really was supposed to be Snape he has a very weird relationship with Draco... I'm just a little confused. This is a good read, and thought there are a few errors, I like the voice you write in.
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MY GOD WAS THAT SNAPE ACTING AS HARRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


so weird .. I'm confused... was he just trying to be a good actor or something?????


Please update soon and put me out of my mysery and confusion


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person Draconayzia
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope you get to add more too. I really do love this fic. I can't wait for everyone's reactions to a gargoyle Harry! Wonderful stuff!
person thrnbrooke
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I can't wait to read chapter 4!
person eroburn
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
bolt? *cringes* someone shoot hagrid before he can name anything else. lol
don't get caught lol