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for Polyjuice Fun

by Marti

schedule October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey i fyou really like snape/hemrione pairings you should checkout theburningpen.com theres tons of steamy little meons lol. but seriously its reall hot like that.
person Anon
schedule August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok, i have officialy laughed my butt off,,that was great..you have got to post more to this story..how are they gonna carry this one off????gosh, i cant stop laughing...
schedule January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that is one twisted story line! i like it!
person Sammie
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked it! I usually don't like the Mpreg stuff but this was fun to read!
person Heksy
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, that's what you get from being too curious I suppose. I had so much fun, reading this. I had my hubby read it and he went quite pale.
The only question he had was: "Is it really that bad?"
The answer? "Sweetie, it is a hundred times worse, but you didn't mind the making of our kids, did you now?"
It suffises to say he went back to the couch and didn't talk to me for over an hour, hahahaha
person shay
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You've every right to toot your own horn! I read the 3 stories - Polyjuice Fun, Reps and the follow up. My sides still hurt from laughing. Many thanks for sharing!

"Severus, dear, remember how you wanted to know what it was like to be fucked like a woman? Well you can't get any more fucked than this!"

*giggles* Great line :)
person Ryu
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh.MY.GOSH. I cannot believe that you are the same person who wrote hermiones little secret..I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!! You oviously need to write more Hermione/Snape smut!!! Come over to the darker side( pun unintended)!!!This was a one-shot and I like it so much more then HLS. Maybe you can write some more HG/SS?
person Apryl
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was an absolutely adorable punchline!
person DawnEB
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I thought this was great, and you managed to make the polyjuiced action coherent and readable :)

There is a story that deals with HG/SS and polyjuice in all the possible combinations called 'For Someone Special' by LadyoftheMasque, if you are interested it's at the Restricted Section http://www.restrictedsection.org/story.php?story=1284 An epic story, at 163 chapters, but full of lots of fun smuttiness.