schedule
November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
its ok but needs longer and when you write a small chapter make sure you put another long chapter after it quick because people forget stories that only start off with very little.
schedule
November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was awesome start ... please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ...later for now
angel
angel
schedule
November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
a good start i can't wait until you update soon but can the next chapters be longer thanks and bye.