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for Greeneyed Trouser Snake

by dropedonmyhead

person ZooArmy
schedule January 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god please please please tell me there will be another chapter.
another chapter as hot, as great, as awesome, as fucking sexy, like the last one!
*crouching on my knees*
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Heeheee!! I loved this. Absolutely loved it. The strip-down at the party scene...nice. Hot. ;)
person Natasha
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very Very good story. I really relly enjoyed it. Well Done. :) :)
person anonymous
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow...that was great. That was...something I could definitely picture Draco doing--all of it. And thank you for giving that reviewer their just desserts--Harry is referred to over and over as being small for his age so good on you for not making him a power-buff auror like in some fics lol. And even though it was a tiny part, I just loved it when at the party draco downs a whiskey and jingles the glass for Harry to get him another one. fucking fantastic.

cheers
person roxierose13 (not signed in)
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think I read this a while ago. Forgot wether or not I reviewed, but upon reading the AN at the top... well. The only think I can really tell you (without being too mean) is that the reviewer (kyle, aka Masochistic Angel) just has a weird preference of ONLY reading dom!Harry stuff, so don't worry about it, honey. He doesn't even read my stuff anymore for that reason. I wouldn't take it too personally. Personally, I prefer Dom!Draco as long as they are both equal in other aspects. Of course, it all depends on the way the fics written too. I think people need to be open and flexible to fics. It might not be what they would write, but it can still be good. :) Don't let him get to you.
person Anon
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So... interesting little fic you have here. I really liked the first chapter. The part where Harry stripped at the party was too funny. Although I didn't like it that Harry was so passive and submissive. I read the second chapter and I have to say I didn't like it. I just can't enjoy fics with Harry as the bottom. Harry is the savior of the Wizarding World and dealer of death to Voldemort, the darkest wizard of all time. A person like that just seems too masculine in my eyes to be submissive. Draco on the other hand, the vindictive, twisted, sly, deceptive, prissy to the extreme blond bombshell, fashion whore is a far better bottom than Harry. Bottom!Draco is just so much hotter than Bottom!Harry.

Then you kept referring to Harry being the smaller of the two. Harry is definitely bigger than Draco. Harry is a bit shorter with a stronger frame, where as Draco is tall and slim, looking more petit and maybe even fragile. *sigh* I guess the story was cute and very well written, but I just didn't enjoy it as much as I could have because you made Harry the submissive of the couple. Maybe next time you could write something with a dominate and possessive Harry?

~Kyle aka Masochistic Angel
person Anon
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is fantastic...the only problem i am having with it is Side scrolling. It is VERY obnoxious..and it only seems to be in chapter two...side scrolling is up pretty high on the list of things that will keep me from reading a story. Please Fix it!!
person fallangelsquill
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that... was THE single most amazing fic/piece of writing in general that I have ever read in my whole entire life!!!!!!! and to think I wasn't going to read it because I didn't like the title! Thank god for running out of fics to read, eh? Lovely, brilliant, inspirational, and if Hermione's not completely grossed out by it being Harry, then I think Ron'll get th shagging of a life time! ^_~
person Morgan
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was a really fun story to read. Thanks for sharing it. I hope to read more of your writing. This was really well written, funny and sexy. Very, very nice.
person thrnbrooke
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*smile* That was perfect!