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June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey are you going to continue this or should i just delete it from my list??
e-mail me with your answer at kaoru_14_89@hotmail.com
...ta
Aya
e-mail me with your answer at kaoru_14_89@hotmail.com
...ta
Aya
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April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes, for goodness sake, continue. I loved this story when I thought it only had two chapters, but the prospect of more has certainly brightened my day.
Leenah.
Leenah.
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March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is too cute...lol That was some good smut though. Hey don't mind Anon, see me personally I think they are both able to be vulnerable enough to give or take...Yes one may be more dom than the other but in my expereince with my husband, one of us usually takes the lead and the other enjoys it very much. Though there are strictly top and bottoms-who cares, its your story! ;)
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March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh tooo too funny! I can't wait for chapter 4!
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March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome! yes do please continue but maybe make it under a new story...?
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March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whahahahaha, "Operation Find The Bottom"?
Only you can come up with something like that....
Please...continue, if only for the laughs...
Only you can come up with something like that....
Please...continue, if only for the laughs...
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March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Should?!?!?! You better!!!! Er..I mean, Please do continue!!! ^^
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March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Keep going - it's hilarious!
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February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just read reviews and find out some saying of not supporting bottoming Harry - actually my personal preference is Top!Draco, but if I really come across any fiction of Bottom!Draco, but Draco and Harry have equal share of power, I will just skip that part and read on! So I think bottom!Harry is also VERY okay!
Actually I don't like any fic that have TOO submissive Harry, like Harry is fragile and weak and broken, and Draco is somewhat powerful and superman-like, I actually have my hairs stand on whenever reading one! That is too OOC (just found out the meaning of this word) - and I don't like it!!! In your case, even Harry is a bottom, but their relationship is just perfect - no one dominating anything except sex life!
Please keep on, and I will definitely like to read more!
Actually I don't like any fic that have TOO submissive Harry, like Harry is fragile and weak and broken, and Draco is somewhat powerful and superman-like, I actually have my hairs stand on whenever reading one! That is too OOC (just found out the meaning of this word) - and I don't like it!!! In your case, even Harry is a bottom, but their relationship is just perfect - no one dominating anything except sex life!
Please keep on, and I will definitely like to read more!
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January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked your story a lot. The dynamics of the couple are interesting. I loathe stories where suddenly Harry is superpowerful and that implies that Draco becomes his completely submissive partner. Most of HD fiction appears to consist of those stories, which is disheartening.
I don't hate stories where Draco is a bottom per se, a good example would be "Shadow of his wings" where he bottoms but is a forceful and powerful character. I just hate where Draco is degraded and expected to behave like a welcome mat.
Your story is nothing like that, it is vibrant, funny and believable. Harry lets Draco take control in the bedroom, but he is a complete mainstay of the relationship. I just hope you write more stories in this rich vein. Do not be disheartened by petty critique, when you clearly have written a very good fic.
I don't hate stories where Draco is a bottom per se, a good example would be "Shadow of his wings" where he bottoms but is a forceful and powerful character. I just hate where Draco is degraded and expected to behave like a welcome mat.
Your story is nothing like that, it is vibrant, funny and believable. Harry lets Draco take control in the bedroom, but he is a complete mainstay of the relationship. I just hope you write more stories in this rich vein. Do not be disheartened by petty critique, when you clearly have written a very good fic.