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for If Only

by SilverPhantom

person Elisel
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was great. definitly continue
person kim
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YEs! Continue! Im very interested.......will keep an eye out for updates! I found it very interesting! Blessings, Kim
person KM
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
If you don't continue to update this, I might just have to hit you upside the head with a tuna. It won't be pretty. XD

Seriously though, wow. I like the writing style, and the little dragons are excellent *cough* I have a slight obsession with dragons *cough*. Have fun keeping all the assorted memories straight!

Hmmm...so Harry saves him in both his memories - does this imply he cared in the "canon" version of events too? I look forward to more!!
person Lady X
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hmmm...this is looking pretty good. I hope to see more soon. Why does Harry remember thopguh?...and what was the deal with Lucius and Draco in Diagon Alley?...He knows what?...confusedness update soon!!!
person vibora
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is soooo interesting! update soon!
person xEVx
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The storyline look kind of familar to me whereby Draco made a wish before he die and was transported back to the age where he is eleven, but i can't remember what it's title was.

Nevertheless, i feels that this story might be a little confusing if you continue to play out the two memories in the same fashion.

Looking forward to the next few chapters you post on adultfanfic! d(^-^)b
person greenwizard
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I wanted to say that so far I like your story. The only problem I had with it was the dragon. That part confused me a little bit. You might want to go into a little more explanation about that. For one, I wasn't sure if Draco knew about it or not. And what kind of dragon was it that everything changed. Was it the dragon or something else? How the dragon ties into anything really doesn't make sense.