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for Who am I really?

by BlindedHP

schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love the story so far PLZ PLZ update soon
person anniea
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like this story reminds me of mine but it's different.
person Jan
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Although I still love this story and this last chapter was great, I have to say that I am hoping that now that you have started to take an interest to this story you make more updates, because almost 9 months without an update is hard. So far the story it self is brilliant. Your doing a great job at it, that I can't help but feel a bit disappointed that it's taken this long and to hear that you had lost interest was a bit worrisome. I hope you don't abandon it. So please, Please update chapter 7 soon.
person Hambares
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanx for updating! I'm glad you are back!
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is just too neat!! I love the word contest. It makes me want to just sit down with the thickest freakin' dictionary I can get my hands on and start memorizing! Wonder stuff. Please continue.
person Anon
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i think that your story is cute. i like how severus explains light v. dark magic and i think your portayal of theo potter as a spoiled idiot is funny. i actually know 2 McShanes' a collen and a reilly. i can't wait to see how ray's relationship to severus is outed and how everyone reacts. may muses visit your dreams...so you can keep writting.
person Leentjef
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW THIS WAS VERY VERY GOOD
keep going and please writ also a sequel for your first
story
post soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
bye bye
person Yocum1219
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying this fic. For English not being your first language, you're doing very well. I've not caught many mistakes. Though you had a small one...you used patients and I think you meant patience. www.webster.com is a great reference! I also don't mind being a beta if you ever need one! Wonderful story anyway!! :) Please let me know when you update! I'm going off to read more!
person Jewel
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just happened to stumble upon this story and now (having enjoyed reading it) am wondering if it will be continued.
person nulinka
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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