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by Meander

person Moyima
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. Draco's dominance is very sexy! I can't wait to see how Harry caves in!
person Fiona
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah man, a massage sounds so relaxing! I should really get one.. =)
Very nice update!
person LacerZ
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love it! im kinda sad Harry gave in so soon but im sure it will go along with the plot. ^^
person Mayo
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*pouts*

continue or ill cast a spell on you! a sexy spell lmao XD;;;

i love this story please update soon :]
person zingala
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey,

I just finished reading what you've posted so far and think this is as great story. I'm looking forward to the rest:-)
person madlodger
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 5
Hey, Meander, chapter 5 already! You update fast, thank you.

5 chapter mark is a good place to compliment you for excellent writing. This is much better then average, you are creative and seem to have a great balance between characters. I like how beleivable Harry and Draco are, even though they are grown-ups now, they don't feel OOC. Very enjoyable:D

Back to the chapter:
So, the deal was made, he, he. One month is not that long, Draco will have to work really hard and be constantly 'on it'. Does he have any other jobs or responsibilities?
I wonder if Harry actually broke Draco's face. Draco had almost lost control and it was-what-24 hours.
From what Draco was saying I get that feeling that Harry was watched while sleeping in his own house. That makes Draco a stalker and more obsessed then we have previously thought.

I think that Harry has developed a sort of fobia about sex. He also crambled in the face of perfect logic. So, Malfoy should just tell him that having sex will improve his shooting accuracy and range by 2% every time so he needs to do it 50 times to improve 100%, he ,he, he!

Waiting for the next update now:)
person acr
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter.
person acr
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loving this fic. It kinda pisses me off that Severus survived the war, though.
person AngelStarFire_Hikarist
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow... Even when Harry's mind isn't on work, it's on work.... I love the way you really have kept them in character... Draco is as sneaky as ever, Harry as readable (He was incredably readable in the actual books, go figure...), and the both of them still incredibly stubborn... It's wonderful. ^__^ Most authors lose the basic characterizations of the characters they write, but you've kept up with it really well... and I loved the hot pool scene in the last chapter. ^__^ It was wonderful! Poor Harry... his sensitivity is going to get him into even more trouble later. ;-)

schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I just checked the Harry/Draco section and found your story...I had three chapters to read! Great job; can't wait to see more!

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