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by Meander

person Isinuyasha
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG this story is awesome! And it's great that you update so quick^^ Some people need an eternity xD
I don't know if that was what you wanted, but in this story I would appreciate it if Draco didn't get his way (You can't imagine how shocked I am! I'm a BIG, really BIG H/D Fan, for almost 2 years now and even in Non-Slash Fics I want them to be together!) His way to think is really crazy and if I was Harry I wouldn't let Draco have his way. At least I wouldn't want to. Maybe that was what you intended, maybe not, but it would just seem so wrong. That is an obsession, not love or something. Maybe you get out of this or you really let Harry have 'his' way.
That's your story after all. I don't know how your mind works ^__~ But I thought you'd like to now what some readers think (well yes...I mean me xD)

I really, really like your story. I even left a comment altough I would rather jump from a tower than write a comment in another language, than my first (*german*)

Ah...so great. Excited to read the next chap.

Bye-bye
Isi
person rebel_mistress
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I swear. Harry's "Good Auror" philosophy/excuse/whatever will be his downfall. Not that I'm complaining--anything to make Harry like Draco, however frighteningly obsessed he was, would be very much welcome on my part. Hehe. Keep it up!
person madlodger
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 6
Very, very good. Did you know that writing a successful food scene is a prerequisite to writing a successful sex scene? LOL That breakfast was absolutely perfect. You actually made me hungry:)

The massage part was well written also. I could almost feel it, he, he. Poor Harry was able to relax for the first time in years.

I wonder about this dinner with Mother part. Is that like meet the parents thing? Like Draco is actually serious and decided to marry him. I wonder what his Mother think about that. Harry still is only a half-blood with no money. Did'nt Draco set this dinner up BEFORE they even reached a 1 month agreement? Hmmmm... He is very sure of himself, ha.
person megf212
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is incredible. You're writing style is wonderful...I love the intermingled thoughts. Please, update soon.
person Kim
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Their first kiss!! *_* Yay!
Lovely chapter! You're awesome, you update so quickly! =)
person mphoenix
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
but you love your loyal readers too much to let us down by not updating. :)
person hakkyou
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really love how this story turned out. Great work^^
person Anon
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You must have been hungry while writing this chapter...I know I am after reading it lol, love the story hun.
person Anon
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great as always! can't wait for the next chapter! :D
person Sakya
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hehehe, I don't see how Harry can resist much longer. Draco is the best thing that could happen to him.