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by Meander

person Draconayzia
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy. This battle of wills is going juvenile! XD

And Cissa needs to be sneakier if she's planning anything. Yeesh! XD
person SLQ
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know who would get a reaction from Harry? Snape is too predictable but what about Seamus or Neville? They both grew up around Harry at Hogwarts and knew Ron, Hermione, and the rest of the Weasleys. Neville is probably a better choice as Draco's friend as he is a pureblood but it's just a thought on my part. Also, Thank you for having Theresa point out to Harry that Draco does have his own agenda and offering Harry a spot at St. Mungo's. I love that Draco got to hear from someone other than friends and family that he's not just out to help Harry but help himself too. Please continue soon and I'm really enjoying your work!
person Draconayzia
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well shit. Draco's an ass, but maybe one with a decent enough idea of what to do. Yeesh!
person nataliebug
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this story is amazing. Your writing is fantastic and the plot is so addicting! i check adulfanfiction EVERY day to see if it's updated! great job so far and good luck with the rest of the story!
p.s. have you had in major losses in your life? your writing is so realistic...you must of gone through something similiar?
person SLQ
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I've got to tell you that I was really hoping Harry would get away from the Manor and decide to come back on his own. I'm also hoping that Theresa will realize what's going on and take Harry to St. Mungos, perhaps under another name, and then Harry later on decides to look Draco up to thank him. I have serious doubts about the idea of the forfeit against Harry and Draco always seems to hold all the cards. If it was this easy to defeat Harry, Voldemort should have easily killed him. Why should Harry wish to get better ever if Draco continues to sexually harass him, interested or not? Wouldn't Draco find it more of a challenge to get Harry while he's emotionally stable instead of spending the rest of his life wondering if he's only with him due to the therapy? Please, continue soon and I trust that you have a wonderful place that you've planned for this story. My hope now is that Narcissa assists Harry in escaping to St. Mungos. All the Best!
person Ann
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry he is so depressed. What a sad demise of the Weasley's. Excellent written.
person Soria
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
your writing is astounding and your story refreshingly original... THANK YOU!!... for not being a pea-brain and writing something new and not merely a variation of hundreds of other stories... and for the many kinky pervy sections... ^_^
person YamiBakura
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
With every new chapter, I fall more and more in love with Harry, and realize how Draco must feel, thwarted at every turn, trying to help him.
person Fiona
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Phew, almost thought Harry would have escaped for a moment there!
Awesome update, keep up the brilliant work! =)
person Kimmi
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Harry couldn't beat house-elf magic? I don't know about that... I mean if Harry really truly wanted to escape, I'm more than positive he has enough power to. Maybe he secretly wants to stay around Draco afterall? You know, craving any kind of human contact.. Hmm, it'll be interesting to see how you continue this story! I anxiously wait to read more. ;)