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by Meander

schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is still so much love. I was gleeful when I found out you'd updated again. Obviously, Harry's going to choose flying, and I'm grinning still, thinking of Narcissa and Harry and Draco, and the tangle they've gotten into. I love that Harry's already working finding someone to sex once and a while into his schedule XD Honestly, you've completely trapped me with this; I'll be lurking, I'm sure, waiting for another update!
person snakevamp
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well i have to say this story keeps getting better and better.
i wasnt suprised at harrys attempt to escape. but i am glad that he is finally admiting he needs help.
and i am looking forward to seeing how draco is planning his seduction from a distance (takes notes)
cant wait for more, this is still a very riveting story
person Lissa
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Is it really over?????
person Minue
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
'Typical Evil Overlord mistake' - okay, that I can accept. D
I tend to write my Voldemorts more clever, but that's most likely not canon. It might also be the reason why they're always so difficult to get rid of...
I have also an addiction to strawberries. Sadly, I'm also allergic to strawberries. I envy Harry... You know what's even better than strawberries with cream? Strawberries with chocolate. Hot melted chocolate. And now I envy Harry even more, and I get some decadent ideas about whipped cream, strawberries, melted chocolate and Draco... I can't wait until the two get together.
What does Harry want to do? Probably flying. But what if he says working? No, I think he is past that delusion now.
Update soon!
person vibora
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
gees! they're both so tricky! ~_^ update soon! they're both falling hard! :)
person plicit whims
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well, i have been reading this story everyday when i have the opertunity, and have always wanted to review, but havent had the chance until now. so first: AWESOME UPDATE! i think that Draco is starting to learn a little as well. i must admit that i was a little frightned at first with Draco's obssesion, but ihave a feeling that it will all work out for both his and Harry's benefits... (ie// wonderful hot man-sex.. gods im so pervy..tee hee)
second im curious to know if Narcissa is secretly hiding thoughts about be-friending the golden-boy... i hope i phrased that right?!?!?
anyway, update soon !!!
jas
person Minue
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked this chapter very much. The conversation between Harry and Theresa was great, especially Harrys reactions.

I have, however, a logic problem with the attack on the Weasleys.

Please correct me if I understood it wrong, but:

Here is what really happened:

Voldemort waited for Harry to leave the burrow, then shot a strange spell at the burrow, which looked like a flaming stone, blew the house up and then created an image of himself which taunted Harry.

Harry told everybody Voldemort appeared with fifty deatheaters and blew the burrow up with Avada Kedavra.

That's a totally obvious lie! At least the Aurors should have realized that a different spell was used (and if they did, one of them would have talked to the press). Also, if Voldemort was there, with 50 (!) deatheaters, why didn't he just kill Harry? He would have seen him outside the house.

And here is the second problem: If Voldemort knew where Harry was and was able to get past the wards, why did he wait for Harry to leave the house at all? Why didn't he just blow up the house with Harry in it, it would have solved all of his problems.

I'm sorry, that makes no sense for me.
person Mayo
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it keeps getting better and better.

you simply must continue :D
person Fiona
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, wonder what that perfect activity will be. ;D
Aww, your explanation of the deaths made me sad and realize just how much pain has Harry been through.. :(
Hopefully, Draco can help him some more! Nice chapter, keep it up!
person acr
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. MAN I hate Narcissa.