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I sort of agree with 'crio' there. Well spoken.

"Typical Evil Overlord mistake."

Hehe. I'm writing that up. ^^

HAPPY THANKSGIVING
I would like to let you know how much I enjoy your wonderful story. Hope that you'll have fun this holiday.

Good chapter. I asked about the Dursleys b/c I hope Draco gets some good revenge on them.

Happy holidays indeed, with an update to this! ^___^ I feel so bad for Harry, but at the same time, I want to grab and shake him.

Very interesting. So, Draco is ready to accept any relationship that Harry is willing to give him? He only has a very light soul bond with Draco. Can you explain more about the soul bound spell? It's a very clever addition and I'm curious about what each level means. I know you said that red is the lightest and goes to indigo but where would friendship or lust appear on the scale? How far does Draco plan to take this relationship? He's spent a lot of time and effort developing the means to hold Harry at Malfoy Manor so where does he see this going? Or, is Draco just one of the overly-rich types who loves elaborate planning for the lack of anything else to do? At the end of the day, Harry defeated Voldemort. Harry could defeat Draco and leave if he really wanted to and break the contract, couldn't he? Please continue soon and Happy Thanksgiving!

CHAPTER 15
15 chapters! Your writing keeps getting better and better, Meander. I really like Draco in this. He is still egotistical manipulative Slytherin but there is some good deep inside. I like a way Draco handles this challenge.

It was a shocking thing to learn about how Weasleys died. I can really see now why Harry is so messed up.

Draco is sure eavesdropping a lot. Are'nt therapy sessions supposed to be private?

I like the inner dialogue in Harry. He seems to detach himself from emotions and use pure logic.

Draco's claim of forfeit was very clever. He did not use any force so Harry has nothing to fight. Did Draco read 'the art of war' or something, he, he. It did earn him a kiss!

Good job, Meander:D

Wow, an entire chapter on erection and of course, masturbation:D Nothing wrong with that, especially when there was a more profound, 'internal battle' thing going on.

I still love your story but there's one thing that's slightly bothering me. It's the fact that almost everything that happens, somehow revolves around sex. Like Draco's attraction to Harry, every now and then it seems it's solely based on physical attraction, with Draco repeating phrases like "God, I want him" quite often. I'd think it could be even more interesting if they actually started to be attracted to each other's character or something. Okay, in Harry's state it probably is easier to start with physical attraction and stick to it, before - if ever - he starts caring because that would include the possibility of losing someone, again. And yes, I've just reasoned why I shouldn't be worried about the fact I was worried about, so yeah:D Things take time.

Can't wait to read more, this story has really hooked me. Once again, the quick updating is greatly appreciated!

You know I love it. Keep up the good work! ;)
//LoveGD

How you describe Harry flying is simply amazing, I can't read enough of it. The talk between the two was also great. I think I am addicted to this story ;).