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by Meander

person Obsidian Phoenix
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have been following your fic and must say it is very interesting and entertaining. I am sorry I haven't reviewed before but I must admit that I'm rather lazy when it comes to that. Anyway I have a question for you, why is it that the people that Harry works with not realize what he is doing to himself? You would think with the type of work they do they would realize that he was on the path to self destruction. I mean if not everyone at least the head of the auror devision should. I mean shouldn't she be able to read people? Anyway I'm probably rambling but the fact they are just using him just irks me and the fact that he is just going along with it and fighting Draco every step of the way just makes you want to slap him but then again that usually is how people with illness such as his reacts so I'll forgive him his denials.
person Draconayzia
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a cheat shot, but it did work. Sneaky as heck. *snicker*

Looking forward to more!
person madlodger
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 29
Hi, Meander. Wonderful intense chapter. So, Harry did break the agreement, hmmm.. He must of gotten scared of being so close to someone. I bet what being back at the Ministry felt so safe and comfortable. I am pleased that Draco did'nt just get pissed off and give up. But now Draco kidnapped Harry the second time and from the Ministry itself. They won't let this slide, will they. And if Harry likes saving people so much then hopefully he will get to save Draco too. This is getting even more interesting.

Outstanding work, Meander:-D Thank you.
person Obsidian Phoenix
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really love this chapter and it really explains a lot. That was so slytherin of Draco to milk his injury the way he did. Looking forward to the next chapter, I hope it is soon.
person YamiBakura
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Seeing as how this IS Chapter 30 now, I feel no compunctions about adding it.
Chapter 30:

Hm.. I'm so addicted to this story XD. I can't wait until it's updated, I read it obsessively, I agonize over every paragraph, wondering what Harry will do next, and what bit of Slytherin trickery Draco will pull out of his ass to keep him there.

I was glad that Harry realized what an idiot he's being, at least in part. Will he find out that Draco played him just now?
person acr
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter.
person Soria
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you seemed to know all the painful symptoms of having a broken elbow... did you ever break yours?
person Rhiannon Uerch Llewelyn
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ANOTHER EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEVIL CLIFFIE!!!!!!!!!!

You are evil.

(Points to author.)

She's evil!!

Ya. You're very, very evil.

I LOVE YOU!!!! This series is, like, cathartic for me.

I love it!!!

*sniffle*

It rocks!!

XD
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I could rabble on about how I lke your writing style, how you have fantatic grammar and how brilliant the plot is, but that could take all day. Just update!
person YamiBakura
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 30:

That was a sneaky, dirty, underhanded, Slytherin trick if I ever saw one, and I loved Harry for falling into it completely. I don't remember now why I wanted to, and not even rereading it reminded me. Probably because Harry's being a complete sod to Draco, about this whole Ministry and Working thing.