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December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic story so far! I love how you are developing their relationship gradually while keeping it continuously sensual.
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December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah for a truthful first time. I hate when they say it doesn't hurt. I am glad they are going to take turns, makes it more realistic.
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December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 35:
*puddle of goo on the floor* That was HOT. *gurgles a bit* And I LOVED the snarky harry XD
*puddle of goo on the floor* That was HOT. *gurgles a bit* And I LOVED the snarky harry XD
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December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh...that was something else.
I just can't wait to see what will happen next...the thrill, the excitement, the...oohhh...everything.
So darn good. *doing the happy dance*
Thanks for the heads up!
Please, please, PAH- LEESE...update soon again.
I just can't wait to see what will happen next...the thrill, the excitement, the...oohhh...everything.
So darn good. *doing the happy dance*
Thanks for the heads up!
Please, please, PAH- LEESE...update soon again.
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December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well then, I Saw this on Fanfiction.net first, And was Seriously depressed that there were only 4 chapters, then I found it here, And told all of my friends even though they didnt care. ^^ I Woke up in the middle of the night and was like "ooh, Next 11 chapters for an hour before I hafta go back to bed." By the time I was done with them, It was a half an hour untill my alarm clock usually goes off, so I spent the day running on four hours of sleep with my brain on the fanfiction. ^^ *sweatdrop* Anyway, fantastic! ^^
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December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
There is a level of wit and dry humor that makes this coupling believable. Sure, there are times when its all passion and silent and just feeling...but for this couple, for the dynamic between the Harry and Draco that you've written, I think you handled rather well. I found myself laughing outloud while following some of Harry's thoughts. And the top/bottom dynamic is usually quite boring and very much predictable. Yours works because its realistically unpredictable. Well done and happy holidays.
Joie,
Gloria
Joie,
Gloria
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December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah, they finally did it! ^^ I love this story!! Please add me to your update-list, thank you!
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December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I sooo need chapter 36!
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December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know, I've never understood why anyone would want to limit themselves so much sexually and only be a top or a bottom. However, since I am not male or even homosexual, my experience is limitied. Keep writing the story anyway you want to because you are doing a bang up job! This embarasses me to say this but this is a very hot chapter. I just hope that Harry is not too upset in the morning. Keep up the Great Work!
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December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 35) MMMMmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm... soooooooooooo good...
(Sated, shit eating grin.)
That was good.
XD
(Sated, shit eating grin.)
That was good.
XD