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Chapter Thirty Seven:

Heee... I love Draco. ^____^

Ch 37)

oh I mist a chapter. Was very yummy and the talk was great too.

Yay! Another great chapter. Very interesting pillow talk...but then again...

I could visualize the "madness" that came over Harry after killing Voldemort and destroying his cloak. Kinda gripped my heart a little. You're starting to make Harry's anguish very real to your readers; bravo fo that.

And, yes, I agree; Harry is not submissive. But neither am I or anyone I know except for a seldom few...but, every once and a while, we find ourselves on our back, lol. It happens very naturally, the "give and take" dynamic between sexual partners. I would say to continue with the way you're writing your smut. I think it works very well and you have nothing to worry about.

I'm still giggling about the nature of their pillow talk. You certainly have your very own style of story telling.

Anticipating more,
Gloria

P.S. If it's not a bother, could you please e-mail me when you've updated? Thank you so much. shinigami_liason_nefie@yahoo.com

He burned it? Holy have mercy! Must have chapter 37!

Holy bob! I've just read the entire story and I'm blown away. This story is amazing. You have written Harry really well. All his problems are realistic and it doesn't seem like you just created something wrong with him wothout anyhting to back it up. Although I think he plundged into having sex a wee bit fast. I love this story!! I've read something about an alert list? Can I please be put on it? My email is wintertears19@hotmail.com, in case it doesn't show up there.

Ahh, they finally did it! The sex scene was awesomely intense, though I have to say they were both seriously trying to kill the mood, what with talking about Narcissa or gold-digging:D Somehow you made it seem hilarious and sensual at the same time, pretty good an achievement.

I'm rather interested in the plot you've thought into this, because at the moment I can't really see where it's going to go. Or maybe I'm just distracted by the after-sex -scene or something. That was very good, too, I'd also like to hear more about Draco's past. Have you told anything specific about it? I can't remember right now, too tired.

Once again, can't wait to read more! Happy christmas, by the way. (I hate it, but just in case you happen to enjoy it:))

Woohoo! Read all 35 chapters today, and let me tell you - that takes time! Or wait, did I start yesterday? Anyhow, AMAZING work. I love what you've done character wise, plot wise...and of course smut-wise too. ^^

I enjoy every chapter that you've written in this fictoin, but this has to be my fav. I don't like the 'normal' patterns most fictions fall into with the Seme and Uke. In MAS (for the life of me I can't type out the whole chapter name corrictly, lol) Harry and Draco are still strong willed men who just happen to have had sex (that fangirls across the world enjoyed).

I'm sorry I didn't review earlier. Very original. I like it.