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January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I finally got through all 40 chapters and I am in awe of you. :D This story is wonderfully done and refreshingly honest.
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January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
As I read this chapter I couldn't help but remember COS "Scarred Potter....You wish". Great chapter. You brought out the competitive spirit that has always surrounded Harry & Draco. Happy 2007! Nette:)
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January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
all i can say is wow! *fans self*
now that was some serious smut and i loved it. the balence between their competative personalities while they had sex was perfect, and it was nice to see their relationship getting stronger.
though i have a suspicion that some difficult time are up ahead, after all the course of true love never runs smoothly.
glad you had a good holiday and please keep posting
now that was some serious smut and i loved it. the balence between their competative personalities while they had sex was perfect, and it was nice to see their relationship getting stronger.
though i have a suspicion that some difficult time are up ahead, after all the course of true love never runs smoothly.
glad you had a good holiday and please keep posting
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January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Must have chapter 41!
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January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
God, I love you. That was great. Ha, beginner's lucky my ass. I bet Harry has natural talent lmao. I like it how there's no definate bottom or top. You totally should have named this chapter 'Fuck Like a Lion'. Do you know how totally greatly funny that would have been? But I liked this title you have, it's cute. =) I liked the last line very much.
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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 40:
Meander my darling, you never cease to amuse and amaze me with these updates.
Meander my darling, you never cease to amuse and amaze me with these updates.
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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*snicker* twenty bucks says that Draco pouts in the morning... if he isn't gloating for some perverse Malfoy-ish reason! great chapter, still loving it!
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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh Harry can be a real animal in bed ;-)
I hope Draco liked it as much as it looked like.
Maybe Harry will have fallen deep enough for Draco when he finds out about the Dursleys.
Then they can scream and rage and solve it like a normal couple.
That would save them and us the "but I trusted you"-fit.
;-)
I hope Draco liked it as much as it looked like.
Maybe Harry will have fallen deep enough for Draco when he finds out about the Dursleys.
Then they can scream and rage and solve it like a normal couple.
That would save them and us the "but I trusted you"-fit.
;-)
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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, what a stunner of a story. I have read many, many fanfiction stories and a few thousand books (yes, really!) and this ranks way up with the best. I judge stories by the emotions they can provoke in me. Whatever those emotions are, it means that the story is powerful enough to not leave me indifferent. This one has given me a rollercoaster of them. Well done! The way Harry has distanced himself from any kind of feelings and burying himself in clinical unemotinal work, is so powerfully written, one can almost suspect that you know intimately that which you speak of. It is the mark of a good writer to wring a reader's heart so thoroughly that one forgets it is just a story. OK., I am going to put my box of tissues and my club away, it would be a hard choise to decide whom to use it on. They both deserve it (or three...or more). Carry one the good work...we love you for it!
licelli
licelli
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January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AH, Cool beans.
So I had just waxed of every chapter I could find on fanfiction.net, and was practically salivating for more when I went to your authors page and found that this was here! woohoo!
So after a very much resented sleep (t'was quite early...or late, in the morning), I was up and waxing of the rest here.
I reiterate (from the ff.net review you see)
You pimp. P.I.M.P Seriously, you've got me addicted. Hooked, pnwed and all those other unhealthy clingy things.
YOU OWN. as does the fic.
And while your toiling away stress with writing this, I'm doing the same thing by reading it. So ace! And thanks!
Also I'm entranced with how their relationship is growing.
Harry's speech to Draco, by-th-by, totally deserves a good solid fuck. Go you, Harry.
And you, author.
I'm worried over the issue with Harry's dealing with Draco lying to him, and that whole Draco
having gone and pulled a third-year prank on the Dursley's thing.
Hopefully he won't get too freaked, as he seems to accept that Draco does seem to know what he's doing.
I hate that Bones chick, also. You've written her in such a way that if I could, I would strangle her. That sick bitch, using Harry as such. Shame on her. Psh.
I was quite mad in that scene, if it isn't already apparent.
So, over-all, you've managed to dredge up all my emotions, fling them around. You've had me screaming and all other manner of ravings that are probably getting my neighbors more than a little bit annoyed. And, you've made me an addict.
Good job, I'm a veritable lunatic.
So thank you for a very worthwhile read.
So I had just waxed of every chapter I could find on fanfiction.net, and was practically salivating for more when I went to your authors page and found that this was here! woohoo!
So after a very much resented sleep (t'was quite early...or late, in the morning), I was up and waxing of the rest here.
I reiterate (from the ff.net review you see)
You pimp. P.I.M.P Seriously, you've got me addicted. Hooked, pnwed and all those other unhealthy clingy things.
YOU OWN. as does the fic.
And while your toiling away stress with writing this, I'm doing the same thing by reading it. So ace! And thanks!
Also I'm entranced with how their relationship is growing.
Harry's speech to Draco, by-th-by, totally deserves a good solid fuck. Go you, Harry.
And you, author.
I'm worried over the issue with Harry's dealing with Draco lying to him, and that whole Draco
having gone and pulled a third-year prank on the Dursley's thing.
Hopefully he won't get too freaked, as he seems to accept that Draco does seem to know what he's doing.
I hate that Bones chick, also. You've written her in such a way that if I could, I would strangle her. That sick bitch, using Harry as such. Shame on her. Psh.
I was quite mad in that scene, if it isn't already apparent.
So, over-all, you've managed to dredge up all my emotions, fling them around. You've had me screaming and all other manner of ravings that are probably getting my neighbors more than a little bit annoyed. And, you've made me an addict.
Good job, I'm a veritable lunatic.
So thank you for a very worthwhile read.