rate_review Reviews

You didnt do the final battle or the wedding even an epilog it needs a little something

I really like this story alot. Can please write some more chapters?

I love the story. Please update as soon as you can.

@16 You can't end it there!! You have to do a sequel where they are one big happy family..lol..damien is adorable!!! I want to read more!!!

*DB*

Amazing how this thing keeps getting to the head of the recently added queue. You might want to get help for your feedback addiction. I suppose I'll enable you some more with some fresh feedback. I usually don't bother with stories I have read that fall under the guide line of:
If you have nothing nice to say...don't waste the epidermis on your fingertips by typing out crit that is less than "YOU ROCK!!!!". Because 99% of the time, such a critiquer will have to read through the amusing attempts by the other lemmings to defend the writer as the next Hemmingway if it wasn't for viscous flames obviously thrown by those who can't write.

amazing stuff.
defenitly do a sequel.

Actually, Wolfen, I do occasional edits, deletions and such. I'm sorry if it keeps going back in the recently added listing.

I was also asked by one reader to delete the author's note pages, the ones that have no chapter. I have done so, which again adds it to the latest listing.

Clap Clap. Even though I really hate that its ended.

This is a much better chapter. The other one was a bit of a disappointment. I'm glad you included that bit at the first, made the other bit more understandable. Thanks for editing it. I still loved this story.

Red

wow that was great .. i cant wait in till the sequel.. later for now

angel