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for Ensnaring The Senses

by juls

person Bella Snape
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah!!!

Sweet, so sweet!!!

I need a bit of sugary sweetness, as I have a cold at the moment. I like this story ever so much!

When is there going to be more?
person marti
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Lemony goodness!

I really liked this chapter, Juls. Absolutely perfect. And Sev and Hermione forgetting again, getting lost in the moment, so human...irresponsible lol but yet so human. PROPOSE SEVERUS, DAMMIT! sorry, had to get that off my chest. Until later

Marti
person lisa
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww!!!! That was so sweet and he seems like he will be a good father. He has alot to make up for. and yay!!!! I love lemons. hehehe. It was sweet and tender and funny. lol"told you I'd be good" lol. And ohhhh another baby maybe? After all Cissa wanted a brother lol. Good chappie. love it. Can't wait ofr another more please. Please update soon.
person angel
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
~sniff sniff~ that was wonderfull i love it ... hmmm is tonk pg ... please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
person takemeaway
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
squee! That was soooooo sweet! I loved it! The little ring for Cissa was so perfect, and him asking in front of everyone, wow that was just tooo good
person lisa
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwww!!!!! Happy times and I smell more lemons I hope lol. good chappie. More more more. and the inscription in the riung was just perfect. Please update soon.
person Lady Lynn
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh how sweet. I just feel bad for the girl having practicalyy all of her relatives on staff! I just hope she makes some actual friends (other than jamie) soon. of how it would be fantastic for draco to visit her sometime, lol.
person takemeaway
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
squeee! I loved that so so so much! The scene with Sev and Cissa brought tears to my eyes. As a mother, there is nothing more endearing to me than watching my husband interact with our child. I love how little Cissa is Slytherin, but she has a lot of Gryffindor traits too. You capture the spirit of an eleven year old girl very well.
person angel
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
~lol~ well that is one why for her to find out and i love sev anwser ...please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
person Anon
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM