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for Ensnaring The Senses

by juls

person marti
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooh oooh ooh!!! you sure she's not pregnant again? that was one powerful tantrum! but, i'd probably get pissed too if someone did that. he was gone for 12 years? did he think she entered a convent and prayed for his bloody return? MEN!!

great update, there were a couple grammar problems though, but eh, it happens.

until next time

marti
person Sampdoria
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked this chapter; Dolores got her due, Remus and Tonks can see a brigther future for their child and not at least; Hermione scolded Severus! I have said it before: they are my favourite couple and I find it hard reading fics pairing them with other partners, but I want my Hermione to stand up for herself. I thought her forgiving of Severus came to easy earlier, and really liked her to tell him the reality of what he left behind 12 years ago. Now you can give us the smut while putting them back together:-)))
person Amerina
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
why dont tonks and remus abort the baby it would make sence if it could die and kill her and put others at risk and is against the law.
person angel
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man .. im glad she got that out of her and sev knows a little of what happen .. and will sev ever find out about whetherbee... please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
person lisa
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omg!!!!! Noooo!!!! They are sooo close. and argggg them damn Twins. Lol Ginny got them good. Still Severus did over react and was a bit judgemental when Hermione sort of just forgave him and they jumped back in. Poor Hermione is soooo hurt. I hope Severus understands. and lol at the end where Draco is talking about Severus tracking her was funny. I do hope Severus doesnt blow up on Draco for touching her shoulder. good chappie. even though they are in turmoil. more more more please. Please update soon.
person takemeaway
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gods that fight was like one of mine with my hubby. All the many times I have thrown my wedding ring at him, or dropped it to the ground....as Draco said, the making up is the fun. I hope Severus can put aside his pride for the love of his life
person Lydia
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is great. i just love this. please post more soon.
person angel
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yeaaaa the pink toad is in azkaban now .. i hope they can get all the laws change or gotten rid of ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ...later for now

angle
person takemeaway
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YES!! And the bitch is DONE! Hopefully they can get everything in order before Tonks starts to show....that could look really really bad for everyone.
person lisa
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay about time Dolores gets hers. lol omg that was awesome. Poor Bill and Remus and their families. Finally and all thanks to Severus bringing it to Arthur's attention. He's a hero and lol I hope Hermione remembers an extra special reward for him.more more moe. Please update soon.