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for Ensnaring The Senses

by juls

person lisa
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omg he knows now1 A lil late to be reading the letter silly Sev. What a mess! and I suppose Hermione never told cissa of her father. that he is the great Bat of the Dungeons. a big mess. and a big ol fight i fear is looming. I hope they fix things soon for Cissa's sake. Every lil girl needs her daddy. ther are just some things Mummy's can't do that dad's can.
person lisa
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I forgot to say lol more more more please. Update again soon. Love the story.
person marti
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
stupid review things have word limits!!!!!!!!!! they didn't tell me!! aaahh lol....that sentence should read as "She had gone down there.....etc.." sorry bout that.

great story, keep up the good work

marti
person anonna
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good heavens! How will this all turn out? Poor Severus, poor Severus's daughter. I'm not so sure of my concern for Hermione. Did she tell her daughter frightening tales of her father. I thought she loved Severus...
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is cool, but I doubt that Cissa would be moved to another house.
person skydancer
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, he was a git! lol
person sheedy
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great work!!! Too bad Sev doesn't read his mail.
person Marti
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nooooooo!!!! stupid men thinking for us! read it, darn it! Excellent writing, wonderful story and I cannot wait for more.

marti
person ccrawley
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, crap, he did not read the letter. Enjoying the story.
person emily
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, good God! There MUST be more. You can't leave them like this!