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November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww. Severus now knows how much he's missed and how big a git he was. If only he had swallowed his pride. That was such a tender and raw moment for Severus. And just overwhelming foir him. I do hope we get to see if Hermione confronts him next. I just hope she remembers to listen. and He needs to be openly honest and admit his faults and all.I do hope they work things out. It's sad also. Awesome chappie. more more more please. Update soon please.
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November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More, please ... now?! Or at least very soon!!! It's an intruging plot and I'm so worried for them all. Good work.
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November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"Sniff" that was a really sad chapter, my heart breaks for Severus. He missed so much. "Sniff". Can't wait for more, keep up the good work. Toodles.
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November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love, Love, LOVE this story!!!!! Keep up the wonderful work!!
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November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please keep writing this story is alsome, Please more update's soon
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November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow awesome start. I love it already. Ohh dear Hermione's soo stubborn. I thinnk they should all just ignore her and let Severus know. and Stubborn Severus needs to look at his letter before its too late. 2 stubborn bullheads they make quite a pair. and I imagine Hermione smarts still from his running out on her. Severus has alot of explaining to do. cant wait for more. more more more please. Update soon please.
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November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this one so far. It is sweet, and I am glad that this is one with Harry and Ginny and Remus and Tonks together. It looks like this one is going to be chock full of my favourite ships...
Keep it up!
Keep it up!
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November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! What an emotionally charged story. I really like it and can't wait to see how the meeting with Hermione and Severus goes. One little thing though (hope you don't think I'm nitpicking) you said "you would want an ex-deatheater in charge of their children for 11 years. It is actually 7 years, 11 is the age that children start. You already knew that though, your sub-conscience propably took possession of your fingers for a moment. Anyway just thought I would point that out in case you missed it. Can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the good work. Toodles.
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November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great post, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks.
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November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooh, I loved this chapter! no warm fuzzies here: I like the pissed off Snape and scared Narcissa! Most other fics I read with him meeting his child @ a sorting are sickly sweet! Nice. But mean of mummy Hermione to put the fear of the dungeons in her, lol. I noticed one typo, if you don't mind my pointing it out. I'm a grammar fiend~~~~She had went there just once a few years ago, and had been made to clean the chamber pots as a punishment.~~~~~<<
Brilliant start to what I can see will be a wonderful story.
Marti
Brilliant start to what I can see will be a wonderful story.
Marti