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I love stories, where Snape and Hermione have children. Please, write more !!!

No woman with any self respect would give her daughter the same name as the man she loves dead lover. that is just sick in chapter 2 of this story you have Severus odession over Narcissa. and yet he says he loves hermione. Are you that kind of person do you say you love someone but your to fucking odession over someone who is eather dead or broke up with you. And then chapter 3 when Hermione named her daughter Narcissa that was just wrong. Plus having draco call severus dad that is too wired that is not your mom or dad that name unless they are your step parent and rised you for a few yrs. All in all this story is to fucking wired and screwed up for anyone to read. Do everyone a big favor on this site and get rid of this story and write a better one.

Ohh dear that man is infuriating. Lil cissa is so cute. and Draco is really nice and quite human and such a good big brother. Love it. I am a bit disappointed in Snape's reaction. He ran away again! Big coward lol. Ohh well. Cant wait for more. Please update soon.

That was a great chapter. I am so glad that the misunderstanding was cleared up quickly. In Spark, another great story, Severus sees Hermione and Remus kissing, and jumps to conclusions, but it doesn't get resolved so quickly, and makes for some very high tension (i.e. screaming at the computer screen to "just ask her about the kiss you bloody fool!") I am very glad that Severus knows right away that the relationship with Hermione and Draco is completely innocent. Kudos to you as well, for making a nice OFC for Draco. Often, he is paired with someone like Susan or Luna, but I think his standards for a woman would be higher (no offense to either character). Ginger seems like a perfect choice for him. Cissa is a very mischievous little girl, and I love that you put her in Slytherin, because Draco is her biggest influence, and good though he may be, he is still a slytherin (not all slytherins are bad, lol). Ok, well I will stop rambling, and wait for chapter seven!

oh i like this, so sad. dramalishios. update soon.

Oh! Poor Severus! Please make this right ... soon!

OoO! Excellent! I cannot wait for the next chapter. :)

Talk about going to put the proverbial foot in mouth!!!! Omg Draco I hope you have your will made. Severus is not going to take that well but lol He didnt hear the whole thing. Funny just funny but omg cliffie. so evil man. lol more more more . Please Update soon. Love it.

Yes he was a bloody git!!! Stupid Snape.

I hope that things will be smoothed over.

If I was Remus, I would have whacked him round the head with the photo album!

Still sweet though, I really love your Snape.

wow. just wow. this is a great story with a ton of potential. i really hope you see it through to the end!