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for Ensnaring The Senses

by juls

person septentrion
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ch5: Ah, Severus, what are we going to do with you?
person msvanessa
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, now that was a brutal cliffie!
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I am anxiously awaiting the next! :)
person marti
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg, you are truly evil lol! I almost feel sorry for Sevie.......nah. Choked with laughter on his saluting of his father with 'Pops!' hahaha.....Keep up the chapter, will talk later

marti
person takemeaway
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5 was excellent, with a great cliffhanger, and I agree with your assessment of the absurd review you got. I did not at all get the impression that Narcissa was a threat to Hermione. And let's not forget that Narcissa was Draco's mother. I believe that Hermione would name her that for Draco more than anything. I am a married woman, have been for 2 years now, and I have a father in law...he is not my dad, and i have only known him for a little over 2 years....but i quite comfortably call him dad, so saying that's wierd is in fact wierd in itself. Keep up the good work, I look forward to an update
person mekareami
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lovely start :) I look forward to reading more. Thank you for writing
person Annie
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
more more more
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dad is a title of respect: Snape has been like a father to Draco, and Draco has been like a brother to Cissa.

I see nothing wrong with it personally. I think that it is actually a nice way to remember those you loved.

By the way Snape has done another Heathcliff hasn't he? Assuming the worst, instead of talking about it.
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey! ''arianna queen of the underground'', I like this story alot if you don't like it you can stick it. Oh Ensnaring The Senses keep coming with the update's please I love it.
person lisa
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update I am dying to see what Severus' reaction is to hearing the tail end of Draco's and Hermione's conversation. Sorry guess that kinda sounds pushy. Dont mean to. I know r comes first. Just update soon when you can. I really like it and I can see where she would have named her daughter after Narcissa because out of respect for the lady Narcissa was and because Severus respected and cared for her as well as being Draco's mom. Her name lives on. It's actually a compliment in a way. so it's quite silly how some get so upset over the littlest things. It is for entertainment not to be so serious and seriously if one doesnt like a story then they dont have to read it. I hope my opinion doesnt upset anyone either but that's what's so great about the law. Freedom of speech. Keep up the good work and dont let one bad review or even a few get you down. Contibue to write for the reasons you write . You cannot make evryone happy and willl go nuts trying. Goodluck hon. and I like your story.