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by wildrose

person Gaps of Misery
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh shame on me, I forgot to review when I read the new chapter yesterday. *irons hands as punishment, prefers Lucius' punishment, though* ;)
So, whoa! Once again a GREAT chapter with many interesting and wonderfully amusing moments. I absolutely love Hermione's "punishment" (hey, if she doesn't want to do it, I'll do it for her - no problem! *lol*) and I love the style you used to describe it. You truly deserve a MERRY XMAS, hon, and you will deserve a happy new year, too, once the next chapter is posted. And no, this is no blackmail *adjusts halo*... what did you think, of course it is one!! ;P
person Gaps of Misery
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Must be getting old cuz I forgot something again. *sigh*

You can definitely blush again, hon. SO definitely... ;)
person MistressMalfoy
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi there I just wanted to say how much I adore your story. I have just opened a Hermione centric Fic Archive and would love you to submit your story. As we just opened today we only have a couple of stories. But we have advertised on google and I shall be telling yahoo groups and LJ as well :) http://grangerenchanted.com (if you speak to Maria Elena please ask her to submit as well!)
person Die Hexe
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
First I have to thank you for all you've done for me... you've been very close to me... thanks a lot! I love you!!
then, as you know... I liked this chapter!! Greeeeeeat punishment!!! ^^ and well, I have to admit: I like him a little more... Damn love... i would never thought... hehe!!
Post asap!!
person 99
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey I just wanted to say, I love your story. I think you do a wonderful job keeping the characters in canon, especially Hermione and thank you for not keeping us hanging too long after chapter 6 either. I would have been dying. Great story, please keep writing!
person Criosdan
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm so curious what Voldemort wants. Please let us know soon.
person Lady Lynn
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hmmmm, so it seems that theyll be leaving draco alone with hermione while she is wandering the castle with the house elf. interesting. i wonder what will happen.
person Anathema
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*fans self* Whew! I'm with you, Ophelia dear....I wanna be punished too! ^__^
person angel
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great ... hmm what does vody want now .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
person LaBibliographe
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed Chapter 7. I didn't know which way Hermione would go with her choices, but I was kind of hoping she'd choose the cat o' nine tails, just to see what Lucius would do in retaliation. She couldn't know he would heal her afterward and that weapon is really nasty. Lucius would have been absolutely livid, wouldn't he, if she'd chosen the punishment? I hope she doesn't get too mad at herself for choosing the kiss. It was only a survival instinct after all. Can she put some of that ointment on Blinky to help him? Thanks for the chapter!!