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wow .. what is she going to do now ... she can go on like that .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel

You know what? You REALLY should do a terrible chapter next... otherwise I'll run out of worshipping and praising you. *lol* It's perfect once again, and in my humble opinion that chapter was one of the best so far! :D (I'll leave the blushing part out this time, alright? You can do it if you want to, though...)

Happy New Year, hon! :)

Well done, Ophelia! Very good for your first attempt at a novel - and to think you don't always score top marks in your school essays..No more excuses from now on! The characters have depth, and you actually use wit and good psychological introspection. Just check out the odd grammar imperfection. As for Blinky - you know how I think you should make Lucius punish him - and that spell has not been used yet in your story, so...we'll see what else you conjure.

god!!! you want to drive us insane with frustration!!! It's becoming more and more interesting...

RATS! i have to wait for the next chapter! so how long is the next chapter's editing going to take? (don't have to answer that question.) well there has certinly been some interesting developments, can't wait to see what happens! :)

Thank you so much for updating so soon!! I just love your story! I'm hoping though that Lucius doesn't do anything too horrible to Blinky. I'm worried about him. "-(

Oh my god love!!! this was so so so so so damn HOT.... you really manage to make me like him!!! can't believe... you made up a well done punishment.... god... really wonderful..
sniff... can't believe... me.. like Malfoy... sob... But I'll never forget my beloved Sirius!

I loved the end of hte chapter,the bath scene was so hot!It would be very hard to not be turned on to Lucius(or Severus for that matter for very long)But I know she misses her life and needes to get back to it,so I think the order needs to find her and than Lucius come find her the right way!

Chapter 8: I think you caught the new characters very well, especially that lunatic, Bellatrix. How will Lucius keep Draco away from Voldemort? Only a week to figure out a way? He'd better pay attention to that rather than spend his time sexually harassing Hermione (omigosh, did I just say something that stupid? Draco can fry on the end of Voldie's wand - let's have more Lucius and Hermione!!)

So Lucius, Snape, Fenrir, and Bella were at least partly responsible for the bloodbath at Azkaban? Lucius is NOT a very nice man (but hot!) I'm glad Blinky got a chance to be healed, but did he use the ointment before Lucius snatched the letter away? Or was the jar tucked into his pillowcase toga still? I guess, it was lucky that didn't pop out, if so. Lucius was very cruel to Hermione (sigh), so still no glimmer of any redeeming qualities, although he seems to be helping himself to more of her physically without including pain - if one doesn't count the near-drowning. Overall he's still so bad I imagine any redemption will take a while - like 10-20 chapters (grin).

Merry Christmas and thanks for the lovely present of your new loooong chapter!

wow that was great ... please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now and merry x-mas

angel