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naughty lucius....i loved it

Chapter Ten: WOW!! By the time Lucius was finished with Hermione, he'd managed to enjoy her in a whole slew of ways. Hermione got more and more into the sex and I began wondering either about the tea or the violet cookie. How funny that Severus got a floor show. I bet he stayed till the ending credits, too. Poor girl. Is she going to remember what she did? I hope she knows that she was drugged, but that's going to make her starve herself from now on, if she remembers. Hmmm...

At first I couldn't add my review. I had to find out how to log in, because now it's required for posting. I guess the number of reviews will decrease with this added layer for a potential reviewer to go through. Sad for us authors. The reviews only ran about one per a hundred hits as it was. Well, I know how to log in now, so you can continue to update please. Thanks for the wicked lemon!!

The review above was mine. For some reason, although my name was on the review, it didn't go through. I guess I'll sign mine from now on.

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I wonder if Hermione will figure out she was drugged? Maybe Severus will let it slip that he was missing a potion?

Not that she could do much about it. It is not like she could stop eating to avoid getting drugged. But I wonder how much satisfaction Lucius can really get form getting her to want him using artificial means.

Love this story, please update soon!

Chapter Nine: So Hermione doesn't know what punishment Blinky got. I imagine she'll find out later. Poor Blinky. I wouldn't have minded having breakfast with the "monsters" - the food sounded scrumptious and the eye candy (at the table) alone would have made the meal perfect. I love 'listening' to Lucius in your story. You have his voice so beautifully.

Why would he want to show Hermione his library? Not from the goodness of his heart. Who is this voice he keeps hearing? And why did he have such a realistic dream of Hermione - well, the dream Hermione was doing what he was hoping for, I guess, so does that show what his internal desire for her is really like? I know, I know, stay tuned. I hope your houseguests had a nice time, but I'm glad they're gone so you can write some more. It's torture when you want to write and can't get to a computer. Thanks for the further adventures of bad-boy Lucius.

Also Die Hexe ist wieder hier!!!
ok, ok, I know it sounds like 'Umbreit Style' [shiver] ok, girl! that was nice!! wonderful idea for Blinky's punishment!! oh, and Hermione's reaction to Snape is ok..... good work... i'm looking forward to reading the next one! and, my darling, although I'm starting to appreciate Lucius... taking Sirius off my mind will be very very very difficult.. anyway... the bet is open!!

Another....delicious chapter =) I wonder what our precious Lucius plans to do in that library of his...update soon!

ohh great chapter! I totally love an evil Lucius and Severus I think they are in their elements when they are actual death eaters :D well done! lemons? puhhhhlease hehe

Poor Blinky! But at least Lucius didn't torture him to a horrible death like I feared. I

Ok, so you have his dreams and reality mixed up again - pooor "innocent" Lucius - what a pity he can't even find a way to get Hermione to have breakfast with him - this way, will he ever convince her to share much more of his than his food? I guess we will have to wait and see what else you can conjure...