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by wildrose

person 999
schedule January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I'm so happy you updated!! I have to laugh, I guess Lucius and Hermione had a whole audience of people watching them in the library! Now it sounds like others may want a piece of the action as well. Lucius may very well find himself in competition. lol

I also have to laugh about your comment on the library. The place lives in my head as well. I've always envisioned this giant place lined with books, which points up to the ceiling like a cathedral with windows in the top. Sometimes birds get caught up there and fly around. Lol

Anyway, great chapter!!! Please update soon!!!
person ely
schedule January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Continua cos
schedule January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hehehe thatnks to sev mione knows what lucius did ... poor darco what will he do and i dont think mione will trust any food there again ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
schedule January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Eleven: My goodness! Who wasn't enjoying Hermione - either physically or vicariously. Lucius may as well have sold tickets. Everyone is distressed at her disappearance but the sleuthing is going slowly. Ministry twits indeed.

Lucius wants his toy, but is he going to be hoist with his own petard? How sad for him if he falls for Hermione (after numerous nonconsensual outings...) and she rejects him? Oh, how silly of me. He's hotter than Orlando Bloom as Legolas (hmmm, kinda similar looks, too - long blond hair, determined mien - yummy!) She'll never reject him if she can have a chastened lovelorn Lucius. The man certainly know his way around a boudoir, and library, and.... What's not to like with such a bad boy? A few more Lucius lemons and he'll be eating out of her hand - or somewhere. 8-)


Glad you're enjoying "The Wedding". Thanks! I got a laugh of sympathy when I read you had Malfoy Manor going on in your head. I keep trying to do that but the damn place is so large that I can't wrap my imagination around it as a finite entity. So new rooms and functions keep showing up whenever I need something for my story.

It was fun 'hearing' all the major HP characters talking. And Hagrid sobbing, poor guy. Here's hoping for a speedy update! Thanks for the new chapter.
person DieHexe
schedule January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, at last i can rewiew...
so... it is really ....ehm.... hard... oh, and you had a nice idea with that potion... i couldn't believe that Hermy could change so suddenly...^^"
i liked it... well, i have particular ideas about the border between love and sex,... but it was ok....
Lol..
schedule January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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schedule January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, and I absolutely agree on what LaBibliographe said about "listening" to Lucius. In your story, his voice really has a tone and is alive in all kinda ways, and it's a complete miracle to me how you do that... :)
person DarkLady
schedule January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*fans herself* good lord that was sooo hot! and typical Lucius can't get Hermione to give in without a lust potion! hehe love it!

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person 999
schedule January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha I had to laugh when I read the title of this chapter, "Lust in the Library." That's great! It sounds wonderfully smutty! This chapter was a lot of fun, not to mention very hot! I think I want some of that Lust Potion myself! lol

Anyway, great chapter! Please update soon!

By the way, this is 99. They made me add another 9 to my name to sign in. "-)
person angelnomiko
schedule January 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
man ... that is one way to get her to have him ..please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel