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for Deliciously So... (Editing)

by wildrose

schedule March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 13: I liked this new chapter showing us more about the pressures Lucius - and Snape - are subjected to, being servants of Voldemort. Lucius has led his family to horrifying deaths, Narcissa is already gone and Draco hasn't much choice except which way he wants to die. Typical Lucius who tells Draco he's on his own. Such a cold man - this chapter emphasized that more, I think. Does he have any redeeming qualities? Will he stay this way throughout the story? Will there never be a happy ending for Lucius and Hermione?

I didn't see the father-son exchange as funny. I guess everyone has differing ideas on what constitutes amusement. I thought Lucius was being as caring as he could ever manage to be, with that icicle stuck up his a$$.

I still wonder if Snape is evil or a double agent...

Wonderful chapter with intense overtones and new info for us to ponder. Thanks for updating!
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, sorry about the blondes part from my former review
person 999
schedule March 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well I can understand why Snape is enjoying this so much! So am I. With breakfast and Lunch being such entertaining meals, I can't wait to find out what happens for dinner. This little stand off between Lucius and Hermione is hilarious! Of course it's always funny whenever Lucius doesn't quite get his way, (although I have to admit it's equally fun when he does.) I have a feeling though that he is going to punish her for it though. Please update soon, I'm dying to read the next chapter!
person wicraven
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter12: Omigosh, the lust potion only enhances a natural proclivity? It seems perfectly ordinary for Hermione to enjoy the sex variations she showed such a talent for. But that she actually wanted to do all that with Lucius? I agree - probably she would have done it with a mountain troll under the influence of the potion. At least Lucius is a lot better looking. 8-)

Just what game is Snape playing here? Purely a spectator at a love match? I guess we'll see as the chapters roll along. At least Hermione has a way to get untainted food now.

I do love how Lucius gets so riled up with nowhere to vent his spleen. Just like your title - absolutely 'Delicious'! And Draco seeing his parent in flagrante delicto - with Hermione - that would make any child bilious to see their parent as a sexual being. Poor Draco. But a lot of fun!

Please update soon. I love the 'Lucius vs. Hermione' standoff we have now. Great chapter!
person DieHexe
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dear... your fantasy is wide... it was good.. i enjoyed it, it was.. ehm...quiet!
and you're right: it it comic...
post again asap..

ps. poor Draco!!! XD
person DieHexe
schedule February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh...
Well... First.. Poor Draco... it's the first time in my life I say this.. but I have to.. I could picture him... poor Draco..
Second... Nice chat with Snape!! ^_^" He's such a bastard.. hihi[laughs]
Third.. the bet.. love... You won't win!! Reading all this is making me remember about all my forbidden thoughts with Sirius..[suitable only for people of 18 years of age or over^^!] hehe
anyway.. Wonderful Darling.. please, post asap!!
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, okay, okay
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My Gods... I just sat down and read all of it. Absolutely amazing. I can't tell you just how nice it is to see a fic that keeps Lucius in character as well as you have. I think your descriptions of the encounters between he and Hermione are the way that just about every woman invisions them to be when they let their imaginations run wild. It really is perfect. I cannot wait to see just what happens when Draco is made to face them at the next meal. It should be deliciously awkward. Either way, kudos for the amazing story. I eagerly look forward to the next update!
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I didn't expect lucius to use a Lust potion..looks like his charms didn't work with miss Granger?

I feel for Draco...witnessing that can be traumatizing...

Update soon!