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new chapter! I love the meeting scene in Malfoy Manor. They were all full of their characters. Following LaBibliographe's discussion, I think Voldemort kept Bella as a mad dog barking from time to time, reminding his Death Eaters who was the lord.

For me, the change of Lucius was a bit sudden. did not see where did that "I am sorry" come from. Lusting a girl could have changed a devil? I thought you said Lucius may be beyond redemption and I kind of agree. Not that I hate happy ending, just being logical.....

omg that chapter was excellent! Had all my favourite things...beautiful Lucius :D Rodolphus and Rabastan!

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Your writing style is very enjoyable and detailed and the dialog is absolutely delightful. I especially like how you're keeping everybody in character.

As for R.A.B., ignore the A for a moment and think about any briefly mentioned Death Eater. This train of thought leads me to Regular Black, the brother and Death Eater of Sirius Black, who was sorted into Slytherin a few years after Sirius had entered Hogwarts. Imagine this man whose brother and cousin were both Gryffindors. I can imagine that towards the end of his life he had his doubts and switched the locket with a fake one, as after all, the Blacks were an old pureblood family who must have had a lot of very old artifacts in their possession. ^_~

never think Lucius and Hermione can be good match but I really like this story, although I really hate this Lucius. You have made him so real. Cruel, arrogant and evil. And you even managed to make things between Lucius and Snape so funny. Please update it soon?

Hey, this is fab! I love the in depth psycho-analysis of each character and the situations; it's really interesting. Lucius really is 'the forbidden fruit', huh... Looking forward to your next update!
Calliope
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Lovely!! it's lovely, my dear!! really really good..
oh, and i found the little father and son chat quite amusing... maybe my reactions were not exagerated but i smiled a lot!! poor draco... [omg i've just said this.. can't believe]
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Hey thanks for updating! Another great chapter, as usual! I can't wait until the next installment!

While I can see why Persephone might have found Lucius' fatherly talk rather hilarious, I didn't laugh when I read it. All I could think was that Lucius was incredibly cold. You wrote him to cannon perfectly. He is so arrogant, so convinced that he is right, that he doesn't even see the horrible legacy he has left for his son where all roads lead to death.

lovely again darling! I loved the flashie scenes and the rab stuff of course I love a plotting Lucius :D now don't forget to update over at GE :D and if you would like me to copy and paste from this site let me know and I can update for you! :D