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by wildrose

person DieHexe
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First: SIRIUS WILL ALWAYS BE THE HOTTEST IN HARRY POTTER AND I DON'T CARE IF I'M WRITING THIS IN A LUCIUS FANS PART OF THE SITE...but I admit he's had a stupid death...oh, dear...J.K.'s been unfair to him and the Malfoys!!! -.-""" Despite this, I appreciate your Lucius [little sbav] and I enjoyed a lot this chapter!!!! He's so hot and...he's been sweet and bitter exactly as strawberry and champagne!![little laughs]And the garden...omg...it'd be the best place to try the other fruity gloves^^!!!!Yes, this is the craziest review i've ever written...I could do everything in that garden... My compliments! You make my darkest side wake... ^^
Lol!
person 999
schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I had to do a double take when I saw you updated. Thanks for coming back! You know how much I have always loved your story!

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person linmo
schedule August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Almost thought you gave up this story but this charpter is delicious. Killed two primer minister than came back home to suduce an innocent girl. what a perfect devil. Look like you are fitting some DH background into this story?
schedule August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I look forward to reading more when you have time to update. Please continue.
schedule August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 15: The snarky back and forth conversation between Snape and Lucius was excellent, laying out the situation in an easy way for us to understand the ramifications of Lucius
person wicraven
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks.
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved this story. I hope that you could finish it sometime.
schedule May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Believe me... THIS was far better than dinner. We didn't dine in hell, right, but we still had the time of our lives. ;) And I'm wondering: did you only cancel dinner?? Or is something of the desserts left?? *being insolent, but honest at least*

I really went kinda idiotically delighted at this new, caring side of Lucius. I'm so impatient about another moment of sex, I suppose... *lol* Maybe a soft one, maybe in the next chapter?

Oh, and by the way: Expect a message from my lawyers one of these days - I will NOT tolerate having been pushed away from sitting between Severus and Lucius. You didn't even give me a seat next to ONE of them!! PAH!! *stalks away, pouting, to taddle-tail on you to Lucius*
person DieHexe
schedule May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, well, little Ophelia... well done again... you know? you made me think "Oh, how kind are you, Lucius..." and -which is absolutely surprising- "OMG I like Rabastan... he's cute... he's..uhm...he's...I like him."
i liked the end a lot... ^_^
now, i'm looking forward to reading the next... do you think i'll get an headache because of all that scent of flowers?
lol
schedule May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 14: I must say, a little of that lunatic Bellatrix goes a long, long way. She's the most sinister and unstable of them all. She's a complete liability to not only the Death Eaters but also Voldemort himself. She should have been disposed of, but perhaps Voldemort, being nuts himself, finds something comforting in her ravings. Maybe it makes him feel he's not so far round the bend after looking, listening and seeing her behavior. Bella is just shivery and I don't understand why they even put up with her, being all so coldblooded themselves.

Rabastan was believable as something of a lesser power cum parasite in the Death Eater ranks, and it makes sense that he would think nothing of preying on Hermione for his own pleasure, with no regard for her preferences.

Ooooh, evil, nasty chapter full of villains. It's a good thing Blinky was brave enough to come to Hermione's rescue at the price of his own well-being.

Lucius showed a tiny bit of humanity (or possessiveness which isn't the same thing at all) in saving Hermione from Bella. He should have smacked Bella much faster, though. Maybe with an accidental Avada Kedavra. Oop! Sorry, Rudolphus...