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by wildrose

person cateye
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved the chapter,but I felt bad for Hermione noone should ever be maded to something thay don't want to do.And Locius wants to keep her! I can't wait to see what happens next. Severus in the next chapter GREAT!I can't wait to see how he fixes her.
person Bravmiki
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Intense. Poor Hermione. I fear for Lucius the day she has the upper hand...I'm thinking Umbridge.
person angel
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man .... how will sev act when he see that lucius' new toy is mione ..please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
person MistressMalfoy
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohhh good chapter!!!!!! lol he is so evil and I love it ahd sharing with sev? lol dirty dirty writer hehe
person Pam
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks.
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh what a sweet capture.

I WANT MY MIND BLOWN!!!!!!!!
person Pam
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks.
person cateye
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You have nothing to wory about,this chapter is wondreful. You wrote the trio going off on thier own just how I picture them doing it in the 7th book.I can't wait to see the next chapter.
person Anathema
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah, so Lucius strikes again! *taps chin thoughtfully* Veeeeery interesting. I wonder what our dear blonde haired God has in store for our little bushy haired bookworm...


Needless to say, I'm on tenterhooks until you post the next chapter!!! Excellent work!
person angel
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was awesome i love it .. man the boys are going to flip when they see mione is gone... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel